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https://templeofzeus.org/S_Resources

Link to DVD's does not work.
It also says "to advance beyond what is on the JoS website", but should be ToZ.

Can really recommend that DVD btw (Kundalini Yoga for Beginners & Beyond).
Went through it once yesterday and have been using it once a week the past 15 years or so.
 

"THE 5 TIBETAN RITES OF REJUVINATION"

"REJUVINATION" should be "REJUVENATION"
 

"The serpent, a symbol of the Ancient Gods, represents the fiery kundalini force coiled at the base of the spine, which, upon ascending, transforms the human mind and soul to a higher level of understanding and ability. This is the true meaning of "Raising the Devil." The Serpent also represents the DNA helix of life."

"Serpent" is mentioned twice, but capitalised only once.
 

Some names must be updated:
  • [JG] -> [TG]
  • NakedPluto -> Alexandros Iowno
  • Maelstrom -> Maelstorm
 

Some names must be updated:
  • [JG] -> [TG]
  • NakedPluto -> Alexandros Iowno
  • Maelstrom -> Maelstorm
Same goes for
 

"Background: Assited with correcting certain design and grapgic errors."

"Assited" should be "Assisted"
"grapgic" should be "graphical"
 
https://race-truth.com/ and
Race-Mixing in the Hollywood

"the" should be removed
 

The most popular pornographic content depicting race-mixing most of the time consists of Black males and ahite females, exactly in the same way the same is being done in television, advertising, music, film industry etc.

"ahite" should be "White"
 

"of content to as many people as possible. As discussed in another article, social media has “simplified” and “dumped-down” the minds of most people."

"dumped-down" should be "dumbed-down"
 
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it should say
"we all know who really"

found here:
 
Several times on the music page it says "gansta" instead of "gangsta" which I assume wasn't intentional, since the first time its spelled "gangsta"
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Found here:


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I think this should say
"What does porn have to do with race-mixing?"

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I believe it would be more grammatically correct to say:
"where people are no longer interested in meeting or establishing"

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I apologize if its intentionally written this way, since it occurs more than once.
I think it would be better to say:
"who are no longer interested in procreating"

Found here:

"dumped-down" should be "dumbed-down"
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Its the same for the pornography page.


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This should say "Jon (Stryker)'s" instead.

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This should be "or" instead of "of".

Found here:


I'm done for now, I'll come back later and if I find any more I'll post them.
 

"On June 11 323 BCE, Alexander the Great left the world in Babylon. His absnence ended one of history’s most extraordinary chapters ever written."

"absnence" should be "absence"
 

"He taught the sciences philosophy, astronomy, history and geography, and compiled readers of classical figures."

There should be an "of" between "sciences" and "philosophy"
 

"Most notably, Cosimo de Medici who was the most influential lay person at the Council due to being the ruler of Florence met Plethon and attended certain lectures out of curiosity."

There should be a comma after "Medici" and "Florence"
 

"The other Gods, Kronos, Apollo, Apollo, Athena, Hades and others are given distinct roles over elements of the universe."

Apollo is mentioned twice
 

"Indeed, Christians to this very day have found themselves unable to reconcile with the anti-Christian sentiments of many of the Founding Fathers, and the blatant Hellenism of early United States. Nothing shows this more visually than the Capitol Building itself, styled after the ancient Temple of Poseidon of Athens."

1) there should be a "the" before "early Unites States"
2) "shows" should be "demonstrates"
3) "visually" should be "obviously"
4) "of Athens" should be "on Cape Sounion"
 

"Here, Diderot argues in defense of Deism, which, if you have read the articles of George Washington and Benjamin Franklin, you will have noted as a common perspective of thinkers of the time. In the minds of a Deist, a God most certainly existed."

"existed" should be "exists"
 

"ISPA SCIENTIA PODESTAS EST (Knowledge is Power)"

should be:

"IPSA SCIENTIA POTESTAS EST (Knowledge Itself is Power)"
 

All references to "Marc Antony" should be updated to "Mark Antony"
 

"He also directly used much of the imagery of Zeus-Jupiter to convey clearly to the people of Rome that his reign was meant to represent true and philosophical kingship at the head of a commnwealth."

"commnwealth" should be "commonwealth"
 

There are no Credits at the bottom of the page.
 

"Donations are spent on research materials, maintenance of JoS websites, advertising, new websites and for the promotion and advancement of Zevism."

JoS should be ToZ




"To notify us about a donation, ask any related question about how to donate, or if you want to donate in other Cryptocurrencies than the one given below, don't hesitate to mail us at [email protected]"

Is this email still active?
 

In the section on "enemy lies", there are links to exposingchristianity.info and they're dead links.
 

"Now imagine if any country, and especially White countries, had such immigration laws where people have to demonstrate that they are the same race as the natives in order to immigrate. The global criticism, media coverage and sanctions of all kind would be widespread and never-ending. Ironically, this has actually happened to South Africa during the Apartheid era, when it has been -> (was) banned from the Olympics [6] and had severe sanctions imposed upon by the United States [7]. Israel identifies itself as a “Jewish state” and therefore racial discrimination is justified in their case, where they are allowed to participate in the Olympics and benefit from financial and other support, despite the genocide and annexation of Palestinians and their lands since 1949."

1) "were" should be "where"
2) There should be a comma after "Ironically"
3) "has" should be removed
4) "has been" should be replaced with "was"
5) There should be a "the" before "United States"
6) There should be a comma after "support"
 

Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Shaitan

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