Wikipedia article of Joy of Satan

[Stonesofwisdom]

Do you think it needs rewriting? too "scientific" and confuses new members.

 

[Serbon]

Do you think it needs rewriting? too "scientific" and confuses new members.

Yes but you won't succeed. What needs to be done is write on wikipedia of other languagues about JoS, not only by making an article about the JoS, but in the Satanism article start mentioning the JoS, and other articles related to this.