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[Desdemona_666]

HIGH RANKING GODS AND CROWNED PRINCES OF HELL

The page is simply broken.

 

[Egon]

https://templeofzeus.org/liturgical_terms_varvarim.php
The Gods themselves waged war Zeus against the Titans

“The Barbarous Wars” the organized destruction of civilization performed in the name of the sacred.
should have a comma after 'Wars'

that emerged from the Hellenistic period Neoplatonism
should have : after 'period'

the contest of territories
Should be conquest

There are a few other things too, I don't remember right now.

 

[Imperator]

Liturgical Terms - VARVARIM

1) The term Varvarim, it designates a spiritual pathology enacted as material violence: the conduct of warfare in the Name of God, and the civilizational destruction that results from it.

Remove the comma and "it" after the word "Varvarim".

2) The colonial missionary and the Marxist revolutionary who took “Marxism as their divine mandate” but in Atheistical terms, are performing the same Varvarim under different justifications.

A comma is required after the quoted words: "Marxism as their divine mandate".
"but" -> "albeit"
"Atheistical -> "atheistic"

3) Its perpetrators are found among every people.

"every" -> "all"

4) Combined, the term yields: “The Barbarous Wars” the organized destruction of civilization performed in the name of the sacred.

A comma or dash is required after the quoted term: “The Barbarous Wars”.

5) The First Crusade of 1095 was launched with the words “Deus vult” God wills it spoken by Pope Urban II, and resulted in the massacre of Jerusalem's inhabitants, Muslim, Yehuborim, and Eastern Christian alike.

A comma is required after the quoted term: "Deus vult".
A comma is required after the word "it".

6) The Islamic conquests, from the Rashidun Caliphate onward, repeated the identical pattern: the destruction of Zoroastrian Persia, the erasure of Buddhist civilizations in Central Asia, the forced conversion of Hindu populations in the Indian subcontinent, the destruction of indigenous African religions all performed under the banner of divine command.

The conjunction "and" is required before the definite article.
A comma or dash is required before the word "all".

7) The European Wars of Religion the Thirty Years' War alone killed between a quarter and a third of the population of Central Europe were Varvarim conducted by both Catholic and Protestant factions, each claiming exclusive divine authority.

This sentence reads weird, and a reformulation like the one below is advised:

"The European Wars of Religion, especially the Thirty Years' War, in which between a quarter and a third of the population of Central Europe perished, were Varvarim conducted by both Catholic and Protestant factions, each claiming exclusive divine authority."

8) The cumulative effect of two thousand years of Varvarim is the Sahiburah were large: the Name of God has been dragged through so much blood that billions of human beings now associate the very concept of the Divine with violence, hypocrisy, and death.

"is the Sahiburah were large" -> "on the Sahiburah have been large"

9) Jesus, Mohammed, the Messiah – always someone has to save them; the Varvarim therefore enhances all the core misery structures upon which the hoaxes of Yehubor are based upon.

Remove the redundant preposition "upon".

10) The so-called Dark Ages of Western Europe the period from approximately the fifth to the tenth century were not caused by an absence of human capacity.

A comma is required after the word "Europe.
A comma is required after the word "century.

11) The closing of the philosophical schools, the destruction of pagan temples and their libraries, the persecution of those who preserved classical knowledge, the redirection of all intellectual energy toward theological disputes conducted under threat of execution these were Varvarim directed against the mind of civilization.

A semicolon or dash is required after "execution".

12) On the contrary, upon entering Egypt he honoured the Gods of Egypt, was proclaimed Pharaoh, and made pilgrimage to the Oracle of Ammon at Siwa.

A comma is required after the word "Egypt.
"pilgrimage" -> a pilgrimage

12) The Hellenistic world that emerged from his campaigns was a world of unprecedented cultural synthesis: Greek philosophy met Egyptian religion, Persian administration met Greek art, Indian mathematics met Alexandrian science.

The conjunction "and" is required before the word "Indian".

13) But the Yehubor cannot speak honestly, for honesty would expose the crime as what it is.

"as" -> "for"

13) A people that protects its children does not need a scripture to authorize resistance.

"A people that protects its children does not need a scripture" -> "People that protect their children do not need scripture"

14) The Crusaders destroyed the mosques of Jerusalem and the Jihadists destroyed the churches of Constantinople because they could not tolerate the existence of a God who was not their own.

A comma is required after the word "Jerusalem".

15) The Parthenon converted into a church and then into a mosque. The Temple of Isis at Philae defaced with crosses. The Buddhas of Bamiyan dynamited by the Taliban. The temples of Palmyra demolished by the Islamic State. The sacred sites of indigenous peoples paved over by colonial missionaries.

"converted" -> "was converted"
"defaced" -> "was defaced"
"dynamited" -> "were dynamited"
"demolished" -> "were demolished"
"paved" -> "were paved"

16) The spiritual heritage of humanity, accumulated over tens of thousands of years of practice, contemplation, and communion with the Divine, was almost entirely annihilated within the span of approximately fifteen hundred years, from the fourth century to the nineteenth century of the common era.

"common era" -> "Common Era"

17) The Buddhist civilizations of Central Asia, Gandhara, Bactria, and the Silk Road kingdoms, were annihilated by successive waves of Islamic conquest.

Remove the comma after the word "kingdoms".

18) The imperial decree to destroy religious images resulted in the systematic destruction of centuries of sacred art: mosaics scraped from walls, icons burned, monasteries attacked, and monks who refused to comply tortured and killed.

"tortured and killed" -> "were tortured and killed"

19) The temples of Tenochtitlan were demolished and a cathedral was built upon their foundations.

A comma is required after the word "demolished".

20) The execution of translators, Tyndale strangled and burned in 1536 and Wycliffe's bones exhumed and burned in 1428, was Varvarim conducted through the murder of those who sought to break the linguistic monopoly.

A comma is required after the year "1536".

21) To destroy a language is to destroy a religion, a cosmology, an entire way of being in relation to the sacred.

The conjunction "and" is required before the indefinite article.

 

[Imperator]

There is a numbering error in my corrections for the Varvarim. The total number of corrected instances is 23, not 21; numbers 12 and 13 were inadvertently used twice during the ordering.

If a moderator wishes to adjust the numbering, I have no objection, as I value accuracy, but the corrections themselves are accurate and remain valid.

Now I will move on to checking Eilotil for any necessary corrections.

 

[Imperator]

Liturgical Terms - EILOTIL

1) Eilotil has been imposed upon every people on earth by every priesthood that has sought to position itself as an indispensable intermediary between the human soul and God.

"every" -> "all"

2) Its victims include Christians taught that they are “servants of the Lord,” Muslims taught that they are “slaves of Allah,” Yehuborim taught that they must obey 613 commandments to remain in God's favour, Hindus told they cannot access the Vedas due to caste, and secular populations taught that the Divine does not exist and therefore that spiritual self-determination is an illusion.

"told they" -> "told that they"
A comma is required after the word "and".
A comma is required after the word "therefore".

3) If the Yehubor is the hollow vessel, the Birburim are the lies it speaks, the Atibilibil is the confusion those lies produce, the Sahiburah is the shaming of the Divine Body, and the Varvarim are the wars waged under divine pretence, then Eilotil is the condition that all of these pathologies serve to produce and sustain: a humanity that does not approach God as sons and daughters but as slaves.

A comma is required after the word "daughters".

4) The Helots were not foreigners, not prisoners of war in the ordinary sense, not chattel slaves purchased on a market.

"not" -> "nor"

5) He could not imagine an alternative because no alternative had ever been presented to him.

A comma is required after the word "alternative".

6) They will not provide meditation: they will not allow people to dedicate themselves to the Gods, and the only acceptable relationship between man and the Divine is a slave-like, ignorance-based connection.

A semicolon is required instead of the colon after the word "meditation".

7) The formula was explicit: “I am becoming Osiris.” Not “I am the slave of Osiris.”

A comma is required instead of the full stop after the word "Osiris" within the quotation.
"Not" -> "not"

8) To declare “I want to become like God” is, in the Islamic tradition, the supreme sin of shirk (association).

A comma is required after the word "declare".
A comma is required after the word "God" within the quotation.

9) It will accept the condition of servitude as natural, as divinely ordained and as the only possible relationship between the human and the Divine.

A comma is required after the word "ordained".

10) There is no meditation to do, prayer is not enough, and one knows no rituals through which to experience the Gods and receive from them.

A semicolon is required instead of a comma after the word "do".

11) Meditation practice is prohibited, people do not have access to their souls, and they do not know how to do even the most basic things in order to experience the Divine within.

A semicolon is required instead of a comma after the word "prohibited".

 

[Imperator]

Liturgical Terms - ISTORIYACH

1) Christian pseudo-history that placed the creation of the world at 4004 BC, Islamic pseudo-history that presented pre-Islamic Arabia as a land of pure ignorance, colonial pseudo-history that denied the civilisational achievements of Africa, the Americas, and Asia, and Marxist pseudo-history that erased the spiritual dimensions of every culture it analysed are all instances of the same pathology.

A comma is required after the word "analysed".

2) The term combines the Greek ἱστορία (historía), meaning inquiry, investigation the systematic pursuit of truth about the past, with the Semitic suffix -yach, an intensive form conveying distortion, corruption, or perversion.

A comma is required after the word "investigation".

3) But a tradition that possesses only commanded memory cannot be corrected; because the memory is not subject to evidence.

Remove the unnecessary semicolon after the word "corrected".
If emphasis is needed, the same semicolon can be replaced with a dash.

4) The reigns of David and Solomon as described in the Bible, a vast empire stretching from the Euphrates to Egypt, a golden age of wealth and wisdom, and the construction of the Temple, find minimal support in the archaeological record. Jerusalem in the tenth century BCE was a small, sparsely populated hill settlement.

A comma is required after the word "Solomon".

5) Yet the derivative is taught as fact and the original is taught as fiction.

A comma is required after the word "fact".

 

[Imperator]

Liturgical Terms - EPISTEMOT

1) The term Epistemot does not designate any race, ethnicity, nation, or people. It designates a spiritual pathology of epistemological murder: the systematic denial, perversion, or destruction of knowledge both spiritual and scientific by priesthoods and ideological systems that require ignorance as the foundation of their power.

A comma is required after the word "knowledge".
A comma is required after the word "scientific".

2) It encompasses every act by which a priesthood or ideological system forbids the human mind from comprehending the laws that govern the cosmos, the soul, and the material world whether those laws are spiritual (the mechanics of the soul, the techniques of Theosis, the nature of the Gods), scientific (the structure of the cosmos, the laws of physics, the evolution of life), or practical (medicine, mathematics, engineering, agriculture).

A comma is required after the word "world".

3) A population subjected to Epistemot cannot find the truth even if it is placed before them, because the faculty by which truth is recognised has been systematically destroyed.

A comma is required after the word "truth".

4) The term combines the Greek ἐπιστήμη (epistēmē), meaning knowledge, science, systematic understanding the highest form of knowing in the Greek philosophical tradition, distinguished from doxa (opinion) and pistis (belief) with the Semitic Mot (𐤌𐤅𐤕, Māwet), the personification and concept of Death in the Semitic world.

A comma or dash is required after the word "understanding".

5) The techniques of meditation, theurgy, ritual communion with the Divine, the mechanics of the soul (Ka, Ba, Akh, Sahu), the methods of spiritual ascent (Theosis, henosis, moksha) all of these constitute a body of knowledge as systematic, as empirically grounded, and as reproducible as any physical science.

A comma or dash is required after the closing parentheses before the word "all".

6) The laws of physics, astronomy, biology, chemistry, medicine, and mathematics the understanding of how the material cosmos operates.

"the" -> "provide the"

7) These are not fringe positions; they represent the beliefs of hundreds of millions of people who have been subjected to Epistemot so thorough that the entire scientific enterprise appears to them as a Satanic conspiracy against the Word of God.

"thorough" -> "thoroughly"

8) The Museum of Alexandria the greatest research institution of the ancient world was a temple of the Muses.

A comma is required after the word "Alexandria".
A comma is required after the word "world".

9) Architecture and Engineering: the pyramids, the Parthenon, the Roman aqueducts, the Pantheon’s unsupported concrete dome (the largest in the world for over a millennium), the Indian step-wells, the Mesopotamian ziggurats all products of civilisations that integrated engineering knowledge with spiritual purpose.

"all" -> "are all"

10) The Epistemot replaced all of this with theology: not the inquiry into what is true but the defence of what must be believed.

A semicolon is required instead of the colon after the word "theology".
A comma is required after the word "true".

 

[Imperator]

Liturgical Terms - KAGOIM

1) It is the doctrine of spiritual supremacism: the claim that the Ka the vital, divine force that dwells in every living being is distributed unequally among the races of mankind, and that certain peoples possess a Ka capable of spiritual development while others possess a Ka fit only for servitude, ignorance, and spiritual darkness.

A comma is required after the word "Ka".
A comma is required after the word "being".

2) But Kagoim is the justification for all of them: the foundational claim that the exclusion is not arbitrary but ontological that certain human beings are, by their very nature, by their blood, by their birth, by the decree of God Himself, unworthy of the light.

A comma is required after the word "arbitrary".
A dash is required after the word "ontological".

3) The second element, Goim (𐤂𐤅𐤉𐤌), is the Semitic term for “nations” specifically, in Rabbinic usage, the other nations, those who are not part of the chosen people.

A comma or dash is required after the word "nations".

4) The compound Kagoim yields: “The Denial of the Ka to the Nations” the doctrine that the vital, divine force that dwells in every human being is, in the case of the Goyim, either absent, diminished, or insufficient for spiritual development.

A dash or comma is required after the quoted meaning: "The Denial of the Ka to the Nation".

5) The seed of an oak and a grown oak are different in every visible dimension size, strength, capacity yet they are the same being at different stages of development.

A comma is required after the word "capacity".

6) In Zevism, the Andrapod is Stage I the beginning of the journey, not its impossibility.

A comma or dash is required after the number "I".

7) The Pythagorean school admitted women as full members (Theano, Myia, Damo, Aesara) and accepted students from across the Greek world and beyond.

A comma or dash is required after the closing parentheses before the word "and".

8) The later Brahminical restrictions on Vedic access represent a degeneration of the original tradition, not its authentic expression an Indian form of Kagoim imposed by a priestly class seeking to monopolise the sacred.

A comma or dash is required after the word "expression".

9) If anyone can approach God and walk the path, the Yehubor loses all it’s false splendor.

"it's" -> "its"

10) Therefore, to lie to them, is acceptable.

Remove the comma after the word "them".

11) Without the Kagoim, none of these pathologies can present itself as anything other than what it is: the exercise of power by a self-appointed yehoboric, fake elite over populations that have been deliberately kept in ignorance.

"yehoboric, fake elite" -> "fake Yehuboric elite"

12) The central claim of the Kagoim is this: that spiritual knowledge, meditation, inner development, and communion with the Divine are reserved for a few and that others cannot be initiated in them; the false pretext goes as far as to say that this is “Not for them” in anyway.

"anyway" -> "any way"

13) The perpetrators of the Kagoim are the Yehuboric priesthoods, fake theological systems, and institutional doctrines that declare the spiritual inferiority of any group of human beings based upon their birth, their descent.

"their birth, their descent" -> "their birth or their descent"

 

[Imperator]

Liturgical Terms - IZFET

1) It is a condition the fundamental tendency of existence toward dissolution, chaos, ignorance, and the disintegration of all that the Divine has ordered.

A colon is required after the word "condition".

2) They observed that justice must be enacted or it collapses.

A comma is required after the word "enacted".

3) And they gave this pressure a name: Isfet the opposite of Ma'at, the negation of the Divine Order, the entropy of the sacred.

A comma is required after the word "Isfet".

4) Izfet is not evil in the Abrahamic sense it is not a moral quality attributed to a rebellious angel or a fallen creation.

A semicolon is required after the word "sense".

5) This is the meaning of Ma'at: not a static condition of order but the active, ceaseless, cooperative labour of Gods and men against the dissolution of all things.

A comma is required after the word "order".

6) "Ignorance is not passive; it is actively destructive, because the ignorant soul does not merely fail to contribute to the cosmic order it inadvertently serves Izfet by acting without knowledge, without justice, without alignment with the Divine."

A comma or semicolon is required after the word "order".

7) The philosopher who ascends from the cave to perceive the Forms and ultimately the Form of the Good, which Plato identifies with the Sun (the Greek analogue of Ra) is the one who has overcome Izfet within himself.

A comma is required after the closing parentheses before the word "is".

8) Metaphorically in spiritual terms; Ra does not choose to battle Apophis; He must battle Apophis, or the sun does not rise.

A comma is required after the word "Metaphorically".
A comma is required instead of the semicolon after the word "terms".

9) Athena was born from the head of Zeus fully armed because the defence of wisdom requires weapons.

A comma is required after the word "Zeus".
A comma is required after the word "armed".

10) Without the active practice of spiritual cultivation meditation, prayer, ritual, theurgy, the pursuit of knowledge the soul loses its connection to the Gods.

A comma is required after the word "cultivation".
The conjunction "and" is required before the definite article.
A comma is required after the word "knowledge".

11) Its absence Izfet is simultaneously falsehood, injustice, chaos, and cosmic imbalance.

A comma is required after the word "absence".
A comma is required after the word "Izfet".

12) The soul that follows the path of the Yehubor whether as agent or as unwitting instrument accumulates Izfet in five specific forms.

A comma is required after the word "Yehubor".
A comma is required after the word "instrument".

13) Satya is the name by which the Divine is known in the oldest spiritual tradition on earth.

"earth" -> "Earth"

14) Izfet is existential; it would exist even if the Abrahamic system was replaced.

"was" -> "were"

15) The naming of these instruments Yehuborim, Birburim, Atibilibil, Sahiburah, Varvarim, Eilotil, Istoriyach, Epistemot, Kagoim, is itself an act of war against Izfet.

A comma is required after the word "instruments".

 

[Way_Seeker666]

Mars: Its Signs, Houses and Aspects

There's a hashtag link to the part of the page for Mars' aspects. This is not in any of the other planets pages.

 

[Way_Seeker666]

The Planets: Signs, Houses and Aspects

For the section of each page listing the planet in the houses

The Sun, The Moon, Mercury, Uranus, Neptune - these are listed in text format EG "First House"

Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Pluto - these are listed in numbered format EG "1st House"

 

[Way_Seeker666]

The Planets: Signs, Houses and Aspects

For the section of each page listing the planet in the houses

The Sun, The Moon, Mercury, Uranus, Neptune - these are listed in text format EG "First House"

Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Pluto - these are listed in numbered format EG "1st House"

Also for Mercury it lists “Mercury in (sign)” while all the pages simply state the signs.

 

[Way_Seeker666]

The Planets: Signs, Houses and Aspects

For the section of each page listing the planet in the houses

The Sun, The Moon, Mercury, Uranus, Neptune - these are listed in text format EG "First House"

Venus, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Pluto - these are listed in numbered format EG "1st House"

Also, in the headings of each page:
Mercury, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn - the headings say "It's signs....."
All the other pages headings do not have the "It's" in them

 

[Way_Seeker666]

The Signs of the Zodiac

Lack of spaces between colons and words in various signs

 

[Mint]

THE BHAGAVAD GITA

This is the ethics of the active soul not withdrawal, not indifference, but engaged action purified of ego.

Period or semicolon needed.

The Zevist reads the Gita as a manual for ethical action under the most extreme conditions the conditions that define the human situation.

Semicolon needed.