ToZ Websites Editorial Check Thread

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Communication with Your Guardian Daemons & The Gods

The 11 instances of "Demon(s)" should be "Daemon(s)"

 

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Why It Can Be Difficult to Deprogram from Christian Indoctrination

1) The 2 references to "JoS" -> "ToZ"
2) "Demons" -> "Daemons"

 

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The Duality of Divinity: Understanding the Chthonic and Heavenly Aspects of the Gods & Demons

In the 2 references to "Understanding the Chthonic and Heavenly Aspects of the Gods & Demons":

"Demons" -> "Daemons"

 

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Dabbling in Zevism

The 2 references to "Demons" -> "Daemons"

 

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Reclaiming the Forbidden Knowledge of the Ancient Priests to Contact The True Gods

"and communing with the Gods and Demons"

"Demons" -> "Daemons"

 

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Communicating with the Gods through the Tarot

The 3 references to "Guardian Demon" -> "Guardian Daemon"

 

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What Connects You & Disconnects You With The Gods

The 13 references to "Guardian Demon" -> "Guardian Daemon"

 

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Christian Greed: They Want Your Money, Your Soul and Everything You Have

"Satan", "Satanism", "Satanic" should be updated

 

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The Creation of Humanity

The references to "Satan" should be updated

 

[Way_Seeker666]

Help for Students

The fourth subject should be COSMOLOGY, not COSMETOLOGY
Cosmology is the study of the universe, cosmetology is the study of cosmetics and their usage. Lord Apollo does not teach people about makeup lol

 

[High Priest Zevios Metathronos]

Excellent and thank you all, let's perfect the sites.

 

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Leonidas

"author" -> "authors"

 

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Names of Zeus: Odin

"author" -> "authors"

 

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Names of Zeus: Tengri

"Jax911" -> "Jax666"

 

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Names of Zeus: Tarhunt

"Thersthara" -> "Therstharu"

 

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Solon

"Thersthara" -> "Therstharu"

 

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Themistocles

"Thersthara" -> "Therstharu"

 

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Leonidas

"author" -> "authors"

Also, "Thersthara" -> "Therstharu"

 

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Pericles

"Thersthara" -> "Therstharu"

 

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Hephaestion

"Thersthara" -> "Therstharu"

 

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Giordano Bruno

"ThePythagorean" -> "Khem Nefermed"

 

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Maat

"offering shows of Maat also" -> "also offering shows of Maat"

 

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Maat

"the latter housing one shared with her by Hathor."

"with her by Hathor" -> "with Hathor" or "between Her and Hathor"

 

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Maat

The 2 references to "presincts" -> "precincts"

 

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Maat

"how Maat was viewed in Hellenic civilization."

"in Hellenic civilization" -> "in the Hellenic civilization"

 

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Maat

"In this is reflected Maat's close association" -> "This reflects Maat's close association"

 

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Maat

"individual initiative.A totally passive"

There should be a space after the period

 

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Maat

"such as a llfe lived harming no one else"

"llfe" -> "life"

 

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Maat

"In this is also a code relating to the Middle Chakra"

"In this is also" -> "In this there is also"

 

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Maat

"Thus Spake Zarathustra" -> "Thus Spoke Zarathustra"

(This appears 3 times)

 

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Maat

"and not to allow themselves to be overwhelmed"

"not to allow" -> "not allow"

 

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Maat

"Clymenestra" -> "Clytemnestra"

 

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Maat

"her contribution to fulfiling"

"fulfiling" -> "fulfilling"

 

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Maat

"the life of mortals’many races"

There should be a space in between

 

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Maat

"In you reside the judgements"

"judgements" -> "judgments"

 

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Maat

"ὁσιας" -> "ὁσίας"

 

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Maat

"becoming a more prevalent imagery during the during the Trajanic age"

"during the during the" -> "during the"

 

[Way_Seeker666]

Just a small one

Witchcraft

Spell for Love/sex

"sex" should have a capital S

 

[Egon]

https://templeofzeus.org/TheDefinition.php
In this page, “Zevism” is within quotation marks in the second line, which was the word “Satanism”, but in this case it doesn't make sense for Zevism, because assumptions from the public towards this word don't exist, nor it would make sense to put “Satanism” there again, so to keep both the tone and the underline meaning I suggest:
misrepresented both Him and what our “heretic faith” is.

This paragraph also doesn't make sense because it reffers to Zevism as "Spiritual Satanism", just replaceing the last word:
We have used this name because it has two essences: Spiritual, which means the need for spiritual advancement and working on the Soul, and Zevism, which means, from the Sanskrit Word "Satya", Truth-ism in an English Abbreviation.

There are other such replacements afterwards that don't work.