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1) "that its not really the enemy doing these, but themselves"

"its" -> "it's"

2) "its not based in one's productivity or actual usefulness, but delusions"

"its not based in" -> "it's not based on"

3) "Its basically two sides of the same coin"
"Its just that money is now spiritual power"
"Its just who they are"

"Its" -> "It's"
 

1) "and its up to us to restore order"
"then its none of my business"
"and realize its just normal to want to survive"

"its" -> "it's"

2) "Its all the plan of the Jew World Order"
"Its well-known Merkel is a Communist Jewess"
"Its about time life is reclaimed from the Jewish Enemy. Its about time people grow free"

"Its" -> "It's"
 

1) "unless its delved into and controlled by it"
"because its very dense energy"
"Now its down here"
"but we can see its not God"
"its not only slavish rich lifestyles"
"its a spiritual allegory"
"that its normal to be a pig"
"and in many cases its the case"
"They know its all a lie"
"and how its a fucking hoax"
"They know that its in their hands"

"its" -> "it's"

2) "Its in our hardware anyway"
"Its a deep seat of control"
"Its just that here you know"

"Its" -> "It's"

3) "Its bastardized to believing in nonsense and fables"

"Its" -> "It's"
"to believing" -> "into believing"

4) "ITS TIME THE JEWISH CHAINS ARE BROKEN"

"ITS" -> "IT'S"
 

1) "Its normal to receive attacks"
"Its our fault"
"Its more than this"
"Its not the jewish version"

"Its" -> "It's"

2) "Its the same exact opposite"

"Its" -> "It's"
"same" should be removed

3) "state how its their fault"
"because its healthy and vegan"
"In the case of the above, its lack of knowledge"
"We say its to be avoided"

"its" -> "it's"
 

1) "Its only a tool"
"Its quite neutral"
"Its impossible that they do not"
"Its all about them"
"The DNA is Genetic Memory. Its MEMORY"

"Its" -> "It's"

2) "For the Goyim its constant stress, fear, ignorance and death"
"its not even remotely “humane”"
"But it doesn't matter as its all profit and you are goyim"

"its" -> "it's"

3) "Since they have been more “careful” but of course, they arenʼt going to move backwards either"

There should be a comma after "Since"
 
Thttps://templeofzeus.org/How_Zeus_Became_the_Devil.php

At the bottom in the navigation links and page titles, this page is listed as "Communication with Your Guardian Demons & The Gods" instead of "How Zeus Became The Devil: The Cultural Inversion Of A Sky King"
 

Hving a relationship with with Hermes Trismegistus, which he helped fix the reputation of, he dispelled part of the belief that all Pagan Gods were evil and looking to mislead humanity was common. Bruno argued that the Christian church’s labeling of pagan Gods as demons was a misinterpretation rooted in Christian fear and Hebraic control.

The first word should be "having". Think "was common" at the end might redundant and unnecessary.
 

He was known as the last Satanic emperor and attempted to halt the spread of Christianity that had been spreading rapidly since the 2nd century, for his rule saw swift religious reforms driven by a desire to return Rome to its polytheistic, Hellenistic roots and minimize the influence of Christianity with strict, anti-Christian edicts.

Satanic -> Zevist
 

"Now, to focus Julian further as a personality contributing to the Joy of Satanas"

1) "to focus Julian" -> "to focus on Julian"
2) "Joy of Satanas" -> "Temple of Zeus"
 

  1. "ABOUT THE GODS/DEMONS; THE TRUTH"
  2. "The Duality of Divinity: Understanding the Chthonic and Heavenly Aspects of the Gods & Demons"
  3. "Guardian Demons"
  4. "Your Guardian Demon: Your Personal Patron In Zevism"
  5. "Demonology Section: How To Summon Demons / Gods"
  6. "Communication with Your Guardian Demons & The Gods"
  7. "More Information About The Gods & Demons"
  8. "LOWER ORDERS OF DEMONS"
  9. "Enemy Lies About The Demons / Gods"

In the above instances, "Demon(s)" should be "Daemon(s)", and "Demonology" should be "Daemonology".

There are other instances within the page where "Demon(s)" and "Demonology" should stay as they are due to their context.
 

  1. About Demons: High Priestess Maxine’s Direct Experience
  2. performed energy work on the Demons.
  3. The Demons are all of the Pre-Christian Gods;
  4. THE DEMONS ARE NOT EVIL!
  5. DEMONS ARE THE GODS OF THE GENTILES!!!!
  6. There is no reason one should fear Zeus's Demons.
  7. When we make friends with the Demons
  8. Many of the Demons specialize in the teaching of ethics.
  9. This right here attests to the reality that Demons are not evil.
  10. The Demons are the Nephilim [the Original Gods]
  11. The Demons befriended humans
  12. The Demons are very human-friendly.
  13. true friendships with several Demons
  14. I have learned so much from my Demon teachers
  15. Sometimes, Demons can be strict in encouraging us to better ourselves
  16. The Demons are NOT "empty shells,"
  17. The Demons I have worked with have very powerful, positive energy
  18. There is a lower order of Demons.
  19. and are assistants to higher-ranking Demons.
  20. When we summon Demons
  21. Demons, The Gods of Hell
  22. About Demons

In the above instances, "Demon(s)" should be "Daemon(s)".

There are other instances within the page where "Demon(s)" should stay as is due to the context.
 

  1. were associating with Demons
  2. lies that the Demons were evil became prominent.
  3. "The fate of each man is his Demon".
  4. The epithet “Demonios
  5. They have myriads of armies of other Demons
  6. will be found in the Demons section,
  7. Many of these Demons are now put in charge of helping humanity
  8. will also receive their Guardian Demon
  9. Demons, the Gods of Hell

In the above instances, "Demon(s)" should be "Daemon(s)", and "Demonios" should be "Daemonios".

There are other instances within the page where "Demon(s)" should stay as is due to the context.
 

  1. Communication with Your Guardian Demons & The Gods
  2. The bond with a Guardian Demon
  3. Your Guardian Demon will orchestrate events
  4. After you pose a question to your Guardian Demon,
  5. You begin to feel the presence of your Guardian Demon.
  6. Your Guardian Demon begins to instill within you an internal compass
  7. a strong indicator of connection with your Guardian Demon.
  8. Your Guardian Demon may appear to you in dreams
  9. the Guardian Demon's role shifts from a guide
  10. In such cases, a Guardian Demon may, by their own sovereign judgment,
  11. Communication with Your Guardian Demons & The Gods

In the above instances, "Demon(s)" should be "Daemon(s)".
 

  1. Communication with Your Guardian Demons & The Gods
  2. The bond with a Guardian Demon
  3. Your Guardian Demon will orchestrate events
  4. After you pose a question to your Guardian Demon,
  5. You begin to feel the presence of your Guardian Demon.
  6. Your Guardian Demon begins to instill within you an internal compass
  7. a strong indicator of connection with your Guardian Demon.
  8. Your Guardian Demon may appear to you in dreams
  9. the Guardian Demon's role shifts from a guide
  10. In such cases, a Guardian Demon may, by their own sovereign judgment,
  11. Communication with Your Guardian Demons & The Gods

In the above instances, "Demon(s)" should be "Daemon(s)".
Same goes for:

 
This thread seems like the most appropriate place to bring this up, and I'd like to emphasize that I mean no disrespect at all in doing so, and apologies if this has been mentioned or addressed before. I've been catching up on the updated material from the main TOZ website, and there's so much more information in comparison to the older archives. The AI age has left me hypervigilant when it comes to reading these days. Is AI involved in refining initial webpage drafts, and if so, is there any interest in correcting some of the awkwardness in the writing that comes with that? I don't want people to dismiss / write off important information. I do have examples, but don't want to write a book about this if this has already been addressed. If I'm not just too zoomed in about this, I'd be glad to help.
 
This thread seems like the most appropriate place to bring this up, and I'd like to emphasize that I mean no disrespect at all in doing so, and apologies if this has been mentioned or addressed before. I've been catching up on the updated material from the main TOZ website, and there's so much more information in comparison to the older archives. The AI age has left me hypervigilant when it comes to reading these days. Is AI involved in refining initial webpage drafts, and if so, is there any interest in correcting some of the awkwardness in the writing that comes with that? I don't want people to dismiss / write off important information. I do have examples, but don't want to write a book about this if this has already been addressed. If I'm not just too zoomed in about this, I'd be glad to help.
Greetings Newestwarrior666. No AI was used in writing any of the articles in ToZ as far as I know. Most of the information comes from many years before AI was a thing and the newest sections and articles (from the last 2 years or so) have all been written independent of AI
 

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"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Shaitan

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