ToZ Websites Editorial Check Thread

[Ex-Translator]

Life Ethics - Envy, Greed, Hate, Anger, Lust, Gluttony XVIII

"From the title, one might think that this matter here will be judged with scorn or with writing and issuing penalties for those that engage in these human processes. In the Path of the Gods, which is Zevism, there is no such topic. Denying these urges and not properly recognizing them, or creating a state of fear of eternal hellfire for one's engagement in them, is only the enemy's work, which is meant to dissuade human beings from advancing spiritually."

"Zevism" should be "Zevism"

 

[Egon]

In the language selector, the flag of India replaces Finnish/Suomi, and Chinese says "China" instead, it should be 中文 (also suggestion to change to the flag of Taiwan/Republic of China instead).

Virtue Ζ - Family & Ancestors

"A building block of our society is our family. While most modern values promote assimilation and hyper-individualism, Zevism stands in the balance of recognizing our ancestors and other people, but also ourselves as free, willing beings."

"Zevism" should be "Zevism".

 

[Sol Rei 666]

ToZ rituals is off, at least for me. (To the admin, sorry if I posted this in the wrong thread for this issue)

 

[Ex-Translator]

ToZ rituals is off, at least for me. (To the admin, sorry if I posted this in the wrong thread for this issue)

It's working again, it was temporarily down.

 

[Sol Rei 666]

The page about the runes and how to vibrate them is all offline.

https://zeusisgod.org/empire/serpentis666/Odin#ANSUZ (Not only the Ansuz rune, its all of them).

 

[magus.immortalis]

Greetings to everyone of our Zevism,

I am writing this because the ToZ needs to be edited. I think the best way to do this [the volume is simply insane] is for us to go and find the link with a mistake, and then post it here, and then we'll get in and fix what needs to be fixed.

To note, this is not to fix things that need updating, but solely editorial. Grammar mistakes, syntax mistakes, the list goes.

Anyone who finds a mistake, broken link, or anything of the sort, please post below. This way we will be able to fix things in due time. The ToZ main has to be immaculate and without any said errors.

Thank you all.

Greetings to our people,

I have noticed a spelling mistake on this page in the Temple of Zeus website:

The Original Gods: Knowing About Gods and Daemons

It is the title of "Demonology Section: How to Summon DEMONGS/Gods of Elysium"

I believe the word is "Demons", not "Demongs".

Thank you for your attention in this matter! The website looks great!

 

[Ex-Translator]

The page about the runes and how to vibrate them is all offline.

https://zeusisgod.org/empire/serpentis666/Odin#ANSUZ (Not only the Ansuz rune, its all of them).

Futhark/Odin

 

[Ex-Translator]

The Bible: A Jewish Conspiracy and Hoax on the Gentiles

37 The Christ Conspiracy: The Greatest Story Ever Sold page 191

"37" should be "38"

 

[Ex-Translator]

The Bible: A Jewish Conspiracy and Hoax on the Gentiles

19 Old Testament Parallels - Laws and Stories from the Ancient Near East by Victor H. Matthews and Don C. Benjamin &3169; 1991 pages 235-240

"&3169;" should be "©"

 

[Egon]

The page about the runes and how to vibrate them is all offline.

https://zeusisgod.org/empire/serpentis666/Odin#ANSUZ (Not only the Ansuz rune, its all of them).

The problem might be where you got this link from as this is the old format. Try without the "/empire/serpentis666/": https://templeofzeus.org/Odin

 

[xlnt]

https://templeofzeus.org/S_Resources

Link to DVD's does not work.
It also says "to advance beyond what is on the ToZ website", but should be ToZ.

Can really recommend that DVD btw (Kundalini Yoga for Beginners & Beyond).
Went through it once yesterday and have been using it once a week the past 15 years or so.

 

[Ex-Translator]

https://templeofzeus.org/S_Resources

Link to DVD's does not work.
It also says "to advance beyond what is on the ToZ website", but should be ToZ.

Can really recommend that DVD btw (Kundalini Yoga for Beginners & Beyond).
Went through it once yesterday and have been using it once a week the past 15 years or so.

https://web.archive.org/web/20150217031642/https://raviana.com/dvd-products

 

[Ex-Translator]

Resources

"THE 5 TIBETAN RITES OF REJUVINATION"

"REJUVINATION" should be "REJUVENATION"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Temple of Zeus

"The serpent, a symbol of the Ancient Gods, represents the fiery kundalini force coiled at the base of the spine, which, upon ascending, transforms the human mind and soul to a higher level of understanding and ability. This is the true meaning of "Raising the Devil." The Serpent also represents the DNA helix of life."

"Serpent" is mentioned twice, but capitalised only once.

 

[Ex-Translator]

"Serpent" is mentioned twice, but capitalised only once.

Either both should be capitalised, or neither.

 

[Ex-Translator]

Contributors - Ask Satan

Ask about astrology, health, spiritual topics, or simply anything you don't feel comfortable asking with your personal account.

ask-satan.net

Some names must be updated:

• [JG] -> [TG]
• NakedPluto -> Alexandros Iowno
• Maelstrom -> Maelstorm

 

[Ex-Translator]

Contributors - Ask Satan

Ask about astrology, health, spiritual topics, or simply anything you don't feel comfortable asking with your personal account.

ask-satan.net

Some names must be updated:

• [JG] -> [TG]
• NakedPluto -> Alexandros Iowno
• Maelstrom -> Maelstorm

Same goes for

https://tozrituals.org/article/contributor.html

 

[Ariadne the Scribe]

• https://templeofzeus.org/Yogic_Breathing

In the link to "ASTARTE'S EASTERN CONNECTION," it has the name "ASTAROTH" instead.

 

[Stellar Starlight]

This should either say "If there are several planets in" or "If several planets are in".

Also, in the 5th sentence there should be a period after the word 'sensitive'.

found here:

Planetary Configurations

 

[Ex-Translator]

Contributors - Race Mixing Exposed

Meet the contributors and authors behind Race-Truth who work tirelessly to expose the truth about race.

race-truth.com

"Background: Assited with correcting certain design and grapgic errors."

"Assited" should be "Assisted"
"grapgic" should be "graphical"

 

[Epiphany]

Are Men and Women Hating Each Other? - Race Mixing Exposed

Race-Mixing is the destroyer of civilizations. Ancient empires have fallen as a result of widespread and uncontrolled race mixing, present civilizations are decaying and degenerating as a result of widespread “multiculturalism” and race-mixing.

race-truth.com

"of content to as many people as possible. As discussed in another article, social media has “simplified” and “dumped-down” the minds of most people."

"dumped-down" should be "dumbed-down"

 

[Stellar Starlight]

Not too much further down the page it says "Katty Perry" instead of Katy Perry

If I find anymore I'll just make it all one post

 

[Stellar Starlight]

Several times on the music page it says "gansta" instead of "gangsta" which I assume wasn't intentional, since the first time its spelled "gangsta"

Found here:

Race-Mixing In The Music Industry - Race Mixing Exposed

Race-Mixing is the destroyer of civilizations. Ancient empires have fallen as a result of widespread and uncontrolled race mixing, present civilizations are decaying and degenerating as a result of widespread “multiculturalism” and race-mixing.

race-truth.com

I think this should say
"What does porn have to do with race-mixing?"

I believe it would be more grammatically correct to say:
"where people are no longer interested in meeting or establishing"

I apologize if its intentionally written this way, since it occurs more than once.
I think it would be better to say:
"who are no longer interested in procreating"

Found here:

Race-Mixing in Pornography - Race Mixing Exposed

Race-Mixing is the destroyer of civilizations. Ancient empires have fallen as a result of widespread and uncontrolled race mixing, present civilizations are decaying and degenerating as a result of widespread “multiculturalism” and race-mixing.

race-truth.com

"dumped-down" should be "dumbed-down"

Its the same for the pornography page.

This should say "Jon (Stryker)'s" instead.

This should be "or" instead of "of".

Found here:

Exposing the LGBT Agenda - Race Mixing Exposed

Race-Mixing is the destroyer of civilizations. Ancient empires have fallen as a result of widespread and uncontrolled race mixing, present civilizations are decaying and degenerating as a result of widespread “multiculturalism” and race-mixing.

race-truth.com

I'm done for now, I'll come back later and if I find any more I'll post them.

 

[Isothemides]

Iamblichus

not sure if this is correct? maybe one was supposed to be magick

 

[SaqqaraNox [NG]]

Zevism's Origins in the Far East

Here the second link should be called MESSAGE FROM ZEUS

Concerning Kundalini Yoga

"Satan" and "Zevism" should be Zeus and Zevism.

 

[Isothemides]

missing quote?

Plato

 

[Ex-Translator]

Temple of Zeus

"SUPPORT THE ADVANCEMENT OF THE TEMPLE"

Shouldn't the whole sentence be in bold?

 

[Ex-Translator]

Alexander

"On June 11 323 BCE, Alexander the Great left the world in Babylon. His absnence ended one of history’s most extraordinary chapters ever written."

"absnence" should be "absence"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Georgios Gemistos Plethon

"He taught the sciences philosophy, astronomy, history and geography, and compiled readers of classical figures."

There should be an "of" between "sciences" and "philosophy"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Georgios Gemistos Plethon

"Most notably, Cosimo de Medici who was the most influential lay person at the Council due to being the ruler of Florence met Plethon and attended certain lectures out of curiosity."

There should be a comma after "Medici" and "Florence"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Georgios Gemistos Plethon

"The other Gods, Kronos, Apollo, Apollo, Athena, Hades and others are given distinct roles over elements of the universe."

Apollo is mentioned twice

 

[Ex-Translator]

George Washington

"In 1793, Washington was unanimously elected for his second term"

There should be a dot at the end of the sentence

 

[Ex-Translator]

George Washington

"Indeed, Christians to this very day have found themselves unable to reconcile with the anti-Christian sentiments of many of the Founding Fathers, and the blatant Hellenism of early United States. Nothing shows this more visually than the Capitol Building itself, styled after the ancient Temple of Poseidon of Athens."

1) there should be a "the" before "early Unites States"
2) "shows" should be "demonstrates"
3) "visually" should be "obviously"
4) "of Athens" should be "on Cape Sounion"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Denis Diderot

"Here, Diderot argues in defense of Deism, which, if you have read the articles of George Washington and Benjamin Franklin, you will have noted as a common perspective of thinkers of the time. In the minds of a Deist, a God most certainly existed."

"existed" should be "exists"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Francis Bacon

"ISPA SCIENTIA PODESTAS EST (Knowledge is Power)"

should be:

"IPSA SCIENTIA POTESTAS EST (Knowledge Itself is Power)"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Augustus

All references to "Marc Antony" should be updated to "Mark Antony"

 

[Ex-Translator]

Augustus

"Major aspects of Augustus’ religious policies can be found on the Jupiter page."

"Jupiter page" should have a URL linking to https://templeofzeus.org/Jupiter