1) The term Varvarim, it designates a spiritual pathology enacted as material violence: the conduct of warfare in the Name of God, and the civilizational destruction that results from it.
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2) The colonial missionary and the Marxist revolutionary who took “Marxism as their divine mandate” but in Atheistical terms, are performing the same Varvarim under different justifications.
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"but" -> "albeit"
"Atheistical -> "atheistic"
3) Its perpetrators are found among every people.
"every" -> "all"
4) Combined, the term yields: “The Barbarous Wars” the organized destruction of civilization performed in the name of the sacred.
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5) The First Crusade of 1095 was launched with the words “Deus vult” God wills it spoken by Pope Urban II, and resulted in the massacre of Jerusalem's inhabitants, Muslim, Jewish, and Eastern Christian alike.
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6) The Islamic conquests, from the Rashidun Caliphate onward, repeated the identical pattern: the destruction of Zoroastrian Persia, the erasure of Buddhist civilizations in Central Asia, the forced conversion of Hindu populations in the Indian subcontinent, the destruction of indigenous African religions all performed under the banner of divine command.
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7) The European Wars of Religion the Thirty Years' War alone killed between a quarter and a third of the population of Central Europe were Varvarim conducted by both Catholic and Protestant factions, each claiming exclusive divine authority.
This sentence reads weird, and a reformulation like the one below is advised:
"The European Wars of Religion, especially the Thirty Years' War, in which between a quarter and a third of the population of Central Europe perished, were Varvarim conducted by both Catholic and Protestant factions, each claiming exclusive divine authority."
8) The cumulative effect of two thousand years of Varvarim is the Sahiburah were large: the Name of God has been dragged through so much blood that billions of human beings now associate the very concept of the Divine with violence, hypocrisy, and death.
"is the Sahiburah were large" -> "on the Sahiburah have been large"
9) Jesus, Mohammed, the Messiah – always someone has to save them; the Varvarim therefore enhances all the core misery structures upon which the hoaxes of Yehubor are based upon.
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10) The so-called Dark Ages of Western Europe the period from approximately the fifth to the tenth century were not caused by an absence of human capacity.
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11) The closing of the philosophical schools, the destruction of pagan temples and their libraries, the persecution of those who preserved classical knowledge, the redirection of all intellectual energy toward theological disputes conducted under threat of execution these were Varvarim directed against the mind of civilization.
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12) On the contrary, upon entering Egypt he honoured the Gods of Egypt, was proclaimed Pharaoh, and made pilgrimage to the Oracle of Ammon at Siwa.
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"pilgrimage" -> a pilgrimage
13) The Hellenistic world that emerged from his campaigns was a world of unprecedented cultural synthesis: Greek philosophy met Egyptian religion, Persian administration met Greek art, Indian mathematics met Alexandrian science.
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14) But the Yehubor cannot speak honestly, for honesty would expose the crime as what it is.
"as" -> "for"
15) A people that protects its children does not need a scripture to authorize resistance.
"A people that protects its children does not need a scripture" -> "People that protect their children do not need scripture"
16) The Crusaders destroyed the mosques of Jerusalem and the Jihadists destroyed the churches of Constantinople because they could not tolerate the existence of a God who was not their own.
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17) The Parthenon converted into a church and then into a mosque. The Temple of Isis at Philae defaced with crosses. The Buddhas of Bamiyan dynamited by the Taliban. The temples of Palmyra demolished by the Islamic State. The sacred sites of indigenous peoples paved over by colonial missionaries.
"converted" -> "was converted"
"defaced" -> "was defaced"
"dynamited" -> "were dynamited"
"demolished" -> "were demolished"
"paved" -> "were paved"
18) The spiritual heritage of humanity, accumulated over tens of thousands of years of practice, contemplation, and communion with the Divine, was almost entirely annihilated within the span of approximately fifteen hundred years, from the fourth century to the nineteenth century of the common era.
"common era" -> "Common Era"
19) The Buddhist civilizations of Central Asia, Gandhara, Bactria, and the Silk Road kingdoms, were annihilated by successive waves of Islamic conquest.
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20) The imperial decree to destroy religious images resulted in the systematic destruction of centuries of sacred art: mosaics scraped from walls, icons burned, monasteries attacked, and monks who refused to comply tortured and killed.
"tortured and killed" -> "were tortured and killed"
21) The temples of Tenochtitlan were demolished and a cathedral was built upon their foundations.
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22) The execution of translators, Tyndale strangled and burned in 1536 and Wycliffe's bones exhumed and burned in 1428, was Varvarim conducted through the murder of those who sought to break the linguistic monopoly.
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23) To destroy a language is to destroy a religion, a cosmology, an entire way of being in relation to the sacred.
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