ToZ Websites Editorial Check Thread

[Kouros Aionios]

In the New Section https://templeofzeus.org/family/Divine_Love_Of_the_Gods.php

Under the last Heading, 'Why This Matters'

"This nothing produces a total disaster; as people can also understand they are truly not loved past a point; this creates clashses in the person and massive depression. It lasts not forver, but insofar the drug of false promises can last."

Spell Check: "clashses" -> "clashes" | "forver" -> "forever"

 

[Kouros Aionios]

In the Theoteknia section under the heading 'On the Restoration of the Divine Parent-Child Bond'

"The arrogance belongs to the Yehuboric system, which claims the right to define the human being's relationship to the Divine by force or Varvarmin and Birburim,"

Spell Check: "Varvarmin" -> "Varvarim"

 

[Kouros Aionios]

In the new Sahukathar section under the heading "On the Just Terror of the Gods Upon Those Who Walk the Path of Yehubor and Izfet"

"This is not cruelty, it's self-fulfilling prophecy of their directions through lfietimes."

Spell Check: "lfietimes" -> lifetimes

 

[Nikólaos666]

Liturgical Terms - ATIBILIBIL

The audio have more words than what is written in the prayer

 

[Grimryper7]

From the recent update, says "file not found"
Updated Covens of the Temple of Zeus

https://templeofzeus.org/coven/CovenGuidelines.php

 

[Kouros Aionios]

The New Option to download a PDF of the Rituals on Toz Rituals is not working at the moment.

 

[Ariadne the Scribe]

Liturgical Terms - HIEROLOGIA

The following are grammatically wrong:
Hierologia clarifies; Birburim confuse.

Hierologia liberates; Birburim bind.

Hierologia produces seekers; Birburim produce only slaves.
Birburim defame them
Birburim require...

And many more... all the verbs that go after Birburim should have -s at the end because Birburim is "it."
So, "Birburim confuse" should be Birburim confuses.
"Birburim bind" should be Birburim binds. etc.

 

[Asra]

Liturgical Terms - HIEROLOGIA

And many more... all the verbs that go after Birburim should have -s at the end because Birburim is "it."
So, "Birburim confuse" should be Birburim confuses.
"Birburim bind" should be Birburim binds. etc.

I think Birburim is plural (the page mentions the Semitic plural suffix -im in the 3rd paragraph), so the verbs make sense.

 

[Asra]

The Afterlife & Death

For: I in Zevist Doctrine, IV in The Structure of the Afterlife, V & VI & VII in Ancient Sources, VIII in Necromancy and Direct Experience
Bottom of page: the previous page is listed as afterlife_info (instead of The Afterlife & Death, the name of the section). The hyperlink also doesn't work, it refreshes the page instead of leading to the title section.


For https://www.templeofzeus.org/Tartarus.php
There's a Sanskrit Satya symbol at the bottom of the page that doesn't appear on any other page of the section. (it's also huge)

 

[Grimryper7]

I noticed that in the God ritual for Aristeus, it is stated his names are mithra, shamash, Utu and that he is a seperate being from Apollo. But in the Daemons section Apollo still has those as his names.

 

[Asra]

I noticed that in the God ritual for Aristeus, it is stated his names are mithra, shamash, Utu and that he is a seperate being from Apollo. But in the Daemons section Apollo still has those as his names.

One small correction those names aren't in Lord Aristaios', they're in Lord Mithra's.

 

[Grimryper7]

One small correction those names aren't in Lord Aristaios', they're in Lord Mithra's.

Big correction actually oops, thank you

 

[Asra]

Bastet

Here are some of his names: - her
Right before that, there is a mention of the Goetic Haagenti, so it could refer to that and be correct.
But the way it's worded makes it sound like it was just a brief mention and that the names listed there belong to the Goddess in her true form, which would also make more sense

 

[Asra]

Abraxas: Hieratic Information

Top of the page, right: Psalm of Azazel instead of Abraxas
Bottom left: the images aren't visible
In the replacement of Satan with Zeus, this might have been missed: those who will seek them will receive from him in Satan’s name and power

Astarte: Advanced Information

Apollo as Shammash/Utu and Astarte as Inanna - We now know Shamash/Utu is different from Apollo.

Azazel: Hieratic Information

Shamash, Utu, Mithra, and related names appear here
It warns to not "pledge" one's self to rumors or false ideals. - there is 1 extra space after the word self
Multiple mentions of Satan (might have escaped replacement)

Amon Ra

Title of the page is Names of Zeus: Thor