The Greys Chapter 6

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Hey everyone, I've posted up Chapter 6, please let me know what you think!
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kali ... /chapter/6

Hail Satan!

 

[egon_88_666]

Good job! You have talent and a future with this.
My only advice is that you could use less colloquial language, not criticism, is 'cause this slangs and "urban" language are hard to understand by those whom are not fluent in english.

--- In [url=mailto:[email protected]][email protected][/url], "ave_satanas@..." <ave_satanas@... wrote:

Hey everyone, I've posted up Chapter 6, please let me know what you think!
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kali ... /chapter/6

Hail Satan!

 

[egon_88_666]

Hi, I think this message can be important http://groups.yahoo.com/group/JoyofSata ... sage/96389

--- In [url=mailto:[email protected]][email protected][/url], "ave_satanas@..." <ave_satanas@... wrote:

Hey everyone, I've posted up Chapter 6, please let me know what you think!
http://www.booksie.com/other/novel/kali ... /chapter/6

Hail Satan!