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Roses and Violets

lucius_montague

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In my work I leave the teaching to be balance of the dark and light. "Delight in both what you create and in what you destroy"~Satan

"Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Or so it is said,
For it is not true.

Some roses are white,
with sprinkles of gold,
with thorn-less stems
an ease to behold.

Some Violets are dark,
still as midnight.
Opposed to the rose.
The inversion of light.

The false curtain falls,
perceptions now gone,
now see the truth;
Tis the new dawn.

No longer the norm,
Nor bound 'black and white'.
See blissful grays,
Darkness fused with light."

-Lucius Montague (Corèa Lüksôn)
 
I love your poem. 
Hail Satan/88!


On Sunday, August 9, 2015 10:59 PM, "dark.prince29@... [HellsArmy666]" <[email protected] wrote:


  In my work I leave the teaching to be balance of the dark and light. "Delight in both what you create and in what you destroy"~Satan

"Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Or so it is said,
For it is not true.

Some roses are white,
with sprinkles of gold,
with thorn-less stems
an ease to behold.

Some Violets are dark,
still as midnight.
Opposed to the rose.
The inversion of light.

The false curtain falls,
perceptions now gone,
now see the truth;
Tis the new dawn.

No longer the norm,
Nor bound 'black and white'.
See blissful grays,
Darkness fused with light."

-Lucius Montague (Corèa Lüksôn)

 
Wow, this is very creative indeed! :OVery unique and original (unlike all the "roses are red, violets are blue" poems one will come across).
I really like the idea and the way you wrote it. Good job! :D


Στις 8:09 μ.μ. Δευτέρα, 10 Αυγούστου 2015, ο/η "dark.prince29@... [HellsArmy666]" <[email protected] έγραψε:


  Thank you brother!

 
Thank you brothers, I try to hone my bard skills and not focus on just being a warrior. I will continue to make my art when I can. I really appreciate all the compliments!
 

Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Shaitan

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