Father of Existence

[mgt4lfe]

I like to write songs and am a aspiring vocalist. I wrote this one last night and would like to know what your thoughts are.

The Father of existence
So beautiful in his power
Mocked and hated by so many generations
The masses of cowards programmed into hatred
Enslaved as the leaders rule lavishly
This sheep mentality 
Penetrating every society
So bow down to your repulsive Jehovah
The fucking bitch coward that he is
The strong follow the true path
The left is less traveled
Bared witness by the Powers of Hell and the Dark Father himself
We will rise and destroy the holy
Sending the sheep to the slaughter
Crucifying the martyrs 
Inverted
Curse their disgusting souls 
As they experience the immeasurable wrath of our Lord
As we finally reign supreme
On this pathetic Earth.

 

[frizzard56]

Almost all of it is really good, but.. Father Satan isn't 'dark'.. He's a god of light. And if you want to, there was  a time when we DID reign supreme. It was called the golden age. I wish it had never ended..

I mean, that's my input. Take it or leave it for what it is.

Hail Father Satan.