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In the New Section https://templeofzeus.org/family/Divine_Love_Of_the_Gods.php

Under the last Heading, 'Why This Matters'

"This nothing produces a total disaster; as people can also understand they are truly not loved past a point; this creates clashses in the person and massive depression. It lasts not forver, but insofar the drug of false promises can last."

Spell Check: "clashses" -> "clashes" | "forver" -> "forever"
 
In the Theoteknia section under the heading 'On the Restoration of the Divine Parent-Child Bond'

"The arrogance belongs to the Yehuboric system, which claims the right to define the human being's relationship to the Divine by force or Varvarmin and Birburim,"

Spell Check: "Varvarmin" -> "Varvarim"
 
In the new Sahukathar section under the heading "On the Just Terror of the Gods Upon Those Who Walk the Path of Yehubor and Izfet"

"This is not cruelty, it's self-fulfilling prophecy of their directions through lfietimes."

Spell Check: "lfietimes" -> lifetimes
 

The following are grammatically wrong:
Hierologia clarifies; Birburim confuse.

Hierologia liberates; Birburim bind.

Hierologia produces seekers; Birburim produce only slaves.
Birburim defame them
Birburim require...


And many more... all the verbs that go after Birburim should have -s at the end because Birburim is "it."
So, "Birburim confuse" should be Birburim confuses.
"Birburim bind" should be Birburim binds. etc.
 

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