ToZ Websites Editorial Check Thread

[Power of Justice [SG]]

http://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/S_Resources.html

"The exercises therin are intense manipulations of the spine to facilitate the ascension of the serpent."

The above sentence is used twice throughout the page, and both times therin is misspelled. It should be "therein"

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

http://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Serpent_Yoga_Info.html

"As I wrote before, the enemy promotes everyting that is unnatural, and anti-life."

Should be: "everything"

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

http://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Serpent_Yoga_Info.html

It is important to be knowledgable regarding nutrition and getting a balanced diet, and if any vitamin suppliments are needed. --------------- (Should be "knowledgeable" and "supplements")

Plants and legumes do supply nearly all of the nutrients we need, but there are a very few you need to be aware of in getting a balanced diet, and in supplimenting these. --------------- ( Should be "supplementing" )

We Satanists are to treat the earth with repect and care. --------------- ( Should be "respect" )

 

[Bun]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PlanetNeptune.html

>Parts of the Body:

throgh poisons

 

[Bun]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AstarteHC.html

(I'm aware that the link for the Psalm of Astarte is to be added later)

Runes: [In that order of importance]: (should be "In this order" ,"In the order", or just "In order")

Her name as Eostre or Ostara, reveals her strong association and love her Father Satan Lucifer, but also, her strong relation with Azazel/Apollo and their light bringing and life bestowing qualities of rebirth. (I'm unsure if this was written this way intentionally but I believe "her strong association and love for her" would make more sense.)

Artemis is a Goddesses

everything bad about here

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Detaching.html

The steps from - "TO REMOVE AN UNWANTED INDIVDUAL FROM YOUR SOUL:" - jump from 3 to 5. I don't think there is a step missing, its just been misnumbered.

 

[Bun]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PREDICTION-2.html

I believe the above page needs to be entirely reformatted. Along with various grammatical and syntax errors/inconsistencies, it is confusing to read through the way the information is currently presented.

 

[Bun]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Control.html

Focus on feeling calm and relaxing inside.

Having a calm orderly and powerful mind (commas missing)

 

[Bun]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Israel_Threat.html

Up to 400 atomic and hydrogen nukes, including thermonuclear weapons in the megaton range A range of systems including neutron bombs, tactical nukes, and suitcase nukes (missing periods)

Delivery mechanisms including Jericho intercontinental ballistic missiles with a range of 11,500 km, and offshore second-strike capabilities using submarine launched nuclear-capable cruise missiles (period missing)

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/About_MKB.html

"The octrahedron is an extremely important aspect of nature and is one of the primary archetypes of creation for all life."

Should be "octahedron"

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"You will know they are permanent when you can feel the pulsating senstion any time you focus your attention on them."

Should be "sensation"

 

[Bun]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/SUN.html

Taurus
Sensuous (listed twice in description's first sentence, redundant)

Libra
They are artistic, peace loving, well-mannered,
...
They are as a rule, well mannered, (hyphen should either be included or removed to retain consistent use of word in description)

Sagittarius
Happy go lucky (should be happy-go-lucky to be technically correct)
...
They are life long students (should be lifelong)

Capricorn
be in the lime light (should be limelight)

Aquarius
world a batter place

Third house
They take pride in what their knowledge. (should be "They take pride in their knowledge." or something along those lines)

Eighth house
have an eight house Sun.

Twelfth house
This placement like that if the Sun in the sixth is not favorable for the health. (should be "...of the Sun in the sixth..." or "...if the Sun is in the sixth..."

Sun/Mars
This aspect also gives aggression and self-assertiveness and is very helpful in offsetting planetary placements and aspects, which encourage shyness. (comma should be removed and possibly reworded to avoid potential confusion "...that encourage shyness."

Sun conjunct the north node (should be proper noun)

 

[Bun]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PlanetMoon.html

Area of the Soul:The 6th chakra, (missing space)

The Moon rules:
emotions,...the emotions,
feelings,...and feelings. (both things are listed twice)

 

[Korpi]

Demons, the Gods of Hell

Demonology Section: How To Summon Demongs / Gods Of Hell

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Energy_Meditation.html

"2. Breath in and at the same time, draw in energy from all sides of your body, front, back, top of your head and bottom of your feet"

It should be "Breathe".

 

[Bun]

There are several pages, sub-pages, and sigils where the name "Astaroth" is still used to refer to Inanna in place of other better suited names for the Goddess. The ones listed here would be more appropriate, https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AstarteHC.html

https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Astaroth.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/ASHTAR.html
https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/New_Testament.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/HELP.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/DEMONIV.html/index.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/DEMONSI.html/index.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/The_Chakras.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Chakras666.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Black_Mirror.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanism_Sanskrit.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Teens4.html
https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Star_of_Astaroth.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Demon_Sigils.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/HOLIDAYS.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Meditation.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Name_of_Satan.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Ritual.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Chakra_Alignment2.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/STUDENTS.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Brotherhood.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Beelzebub.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Cone.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Baphomet.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Yogic_Breathing.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Cursed_Nazarene.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Satanic_Wedding.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Consecration.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/King_Queen.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Necronomicon_Meditations.html
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Complete_Breath.html

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/Exposing_Corruption.html

"With the ascended kundalini and the fusion of the ida and pingala at the 6th chakra, gnosis is obtained and one's spiritual eyes are opened."

"The "sixth day" is the sixth chakra where the male and female ida and pingala meet."

-Ida and Pingala should be capitalized, as they are earlier in the same page.

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"Now, I might also add here- to the fools who have been attacking Enili/Beelzebub with drowning humanity- GET A LIFE!!!!"

- The correct spelling is "Enlil"
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"in other words, deluded ones have been deceived into believing this character will take care of everything spiritual as long as they conform to the agenda."

-Following a period, the beginning of the next sentence should be capitalized.

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

http://joyofsatan.org/satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Desecration.html

"The Jews control nearly all of the world's wealth of which they siezed through occult power."

-Should be "seized"

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"This is why the Judeo/Xian Bible contains to many dire warnings to keep Gentiles from accesssing occult knowledge."

-Should be "accessing"

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"This is not only a huge slap in the face for Gentiles, but an abombination to our Gods."

-Should be "abomination"

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Jeremiah 8:2 - verse should be in quotations

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Baphomet.html

"The symbolism of the Temple of Solomon was stolen and made into an actual character, as with the fictitous nazarene and nearly everything in the Judeo/Christian Bible."

-Should be "fictitious"

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"Along with the "Shroud of Turin lie (the Nazarene is fictitious and was stolen from an alchemical concept of a working which had its origin in some 18+ PAGAN Gods, such as Odin, who hung from a tree and Set who was crucified on a Furka, Osiris who died and was resurrected, etc.), many PAGAN Gods have been passed off as the Nazarene such as Apollo.(period missing) Images by the hundreds of Pagan Gods are now labeled as the Nazarene."

-Missing period

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"Levi combined the images of the Tarot Devil card and the he-goat worshipped in the city of Mendes in Ancient Egypt."

-I don't know what happened here, but I believe its supposed to be “the goat”

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"The Levi Baphomet is very similar to the Egyptian Akhenaton, which is both male and female (note the male and female features of the body and the serpentine facial features which symbolize the serpent kundalini) portraying the hermaphrodite which is symbolic of merging the male and female aspects of the soul, the ida and the pingala and achieving the godhead. "

-Ida and Pingala should be capitalized

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"Leviathan" also known as "Cthulu" is a name for the kundalini serpent.(period missing)

-Missing period

 

[Korpi]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AzazelHC.html

Divine Forces:

The Light
Music
Hermony <--- Harmony*
Law
Justice
Grace
Prophecy

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/EgyptOne.html

"This can be seen in the headdress which is a double feather, indicating he has reached the stage where he feels the levetivity"

-I believe it it's supposed to be “levity” as can be seen on page 2

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"Directly beneath the cartouche appears to be readiating energy, the lines. "

-I believe it it's supposed to be “radiating"

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"They are instructions and the heiroglyphs are deeply religious."

-Should be "hieroglyphs"

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"Directly beneath another cartouche containing an eye shape which I believe represents the 3rd eye again.The looped symbol."

-Small thing, but still. There should be space after the period.

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

http://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Goat.html

"Ea was considered the ?Father of Light" and his celebrations dating back to 15,000 B.C.E., were carried out wearing goat skins.³"

-Where the question mark is, I believe quotations (") are missing.

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?Egyptian Mythology" by Veronica Ions, page 124, the author writes that Ptah took the form of a goat.

-Where the question mark is, I believe quotations (") are missing.

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/NoMediators.html

?I allow everyone to follow the dictates of his own nature?

-Where the question marks are, I believe quotations (") are missing.

 

[tabby]

Anyone else also having this happen with the Fighting Back meditation page?

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Fighting_Back.html

 

[Ol argedco luciftias]

Anyone else also having this happen with the Fighting Back meditation page?

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Fighting_Back.html

No, it looks perfectly normal for me.

Don't use jewgle chrome, or any of the other copies of chrome.

 

[tabby]

Anyone else also having this happen with the Fighting Back meditation page?

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Fighting_Back.html

No, it looks perfectly normal for me.

Don't use jewgle chrome, or any of the other copies of chrome.

Safari is doing it. It looks like a bunch of code lines and such.

 

[NG SATchives]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Throat_Chakra.html

missing image of throat chakra (apologies if this is already posted)

 

[Ol argedco luciftias]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Throat_Chakra.html

missing image of throat chakra (apologies if this is already posted)

Where is it missing? I see the blue triangle in the neck.

 

[Ol argedco luciftias]

Safari is doing it. It looks like a bunch of code lines and such.

Do you have any option to view the website the way it would be seen on a computer? It is common for websites to break when the phone tries to change how they are viewed.

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Daemon.html

"They do not compared to any human in power as they surpass them by an inconceivable amount of power."

-I believe it it's supposed to be “compare"

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"The figure of Pharaoh Rammesses the II, the Greatest Pharaoh of Egypt, is a case where he was worshiped as a God, not even as a Demigod or a Demon."

-Should be "Ramesses", there is only one "m" in his name.

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"According to Hesiod [2], which was one of the greatest spiritual authorities worldwide on his time,"

-I believe it it's supposed to be “in" his time.

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According to Hesiod [2], which was one of the greatest spiritual authorities worldwide In his time, many of these beings of the Golden Age, are indeed now Gods and guides to human beings of this age, so that they can attain spiritually what we can attain.

-I dont get it, shouldnt it be us that can attain what they have?

 

[tabby]

Safari is doing it. It looks like a bunch of code lines and such.

Do you have any option to view the website the way it would be seen on a computer? It is common for websites to break when the phone tries to change how they are viewed.

Viewing it right now on laptop, that's what I took the screenshot on. All the other pages of JoS work for me except that one.
Since NitrateOsfatate666 also is seeing the same problem with another browser, seems multiple browsers are breaking that page for whatever reason.

 

[NG SATchives]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Throat_Chakra.html

missing image of throat chakra (apologies if this is already posted)

Where is it missing? I see the blue triangle in the neck.

It was simply fixed that fast, amazing work.

 

[Ol argedco luciftias]

Viewing it right now on laptop, that's what I took the screenshot on. All the other pages of JoS work for me except that one.
Since NitrateOsfatate666 also is seeing the same problem with another browser, seems multiple browsers are breaking that page for whatever reason.

Okay. Yes, it looks like recently there are more people who have seen pages showing up incorrectly. I know there has recently been a very big change in Chrome about how pages are connected, but I don't know enough to explain it. Maybe Apple has also changed something because it seems like they like to work together, especially if they say the reason for changing is about security.

 

[NG SATchives]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PsalmBeelzebulHC.html

404 not found, brave browser

 

[Ol argedco luciftias]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PsalmBeelzebulHC.html

404 not found, brave browser

Yes, same error for me and websites are usually unlikely to show errors for me.

 

[Henu the Great]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PsalmBeelzebulHC.html

404 not found, brave browser

Yes, same error for me and websites are usually unlikely to show errors for me.

Cobra has said that the psalms will be added later.

 

[NG SATchives]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PsalmBeelzebulHC.html

404 not found, brave browser

Yes, same error for me and websites are usually unlikely to show errors for me.

Cobra has said that the psalms will be added later.

I must of read over that, thanks

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Demonic_Communication.html

"Specifically, this has to do also with the balance and cleanlinesses of the soul itself."

-I believe it it's supposed to be “cleanliness"

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"But (not?) only within the context of a balanced and regular meditation schedule, but also inner temperance that guides someone to true understanding away from imbalances and illnesses of the behaviour and the soul."

-I believe something is missing in this sentence, I've underlined a suggestion that can be put in there.

 

[NG SATchives]

"Magick: transfer of energies, used for projecting or drawing in of energy. Repeated use of the rune will gradually increase the amounts of energy one can handle at any given time. Helps in the growth of one’s own reserves of power. When using Fa with another rune, it works to increase the power of any rune it is used with for good or ill. Adepts can combine the forces of Fa with the forces of Isa (fire and ice), but this could prove disastrous for the uninitiated. Green and shimmering gold work well with the energies of this rune."



Fa should be Ur

 

[Power of Justice [SG]]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Guardian.html

"My Demon is not a Goetic demon and I had some trouble finding his Sigil, but I found it and did the same."

-I believe "demon" is supposed to be capitalized again as it is in the beginning of the sentence.

 

[NinRick]

https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Energy_Ripping.html


Point 3:

3. Begin by visualizing yourself drawing off the victim's aura and disintegrating it. You can visualize yourself actually eating and ingesting the aura until it is completely gone or drawing it into your sexual chakra. Always draw energy with your feminine chakras as these absorb. The masculine chakras project energy. It is best to absorb this type of energy in the lower chakras.

Shouldn't you draw the Energy with your masculine Chakras? As it says here to absorb it with your lower chakras. Also the feet absorb energy from the earth to the lower chakras...?