To Astarte

[nema]

Just something stupid i wrote for Our Beautiful Mother and Queen that never left me.

No Matter how far,
No Matter how dark
The Throne that was burnt
My Will that was done

The eye that was closed
And my Kingdom of foes
My fiery Red soul
But my love never rose

Drowing in waters
Or choking in hell
In this beautiful Nightmare
I tell you, my friend

I would never make It
If She wasn't there..

 

[Tethys333]

I don't think it's something stupid. I really like what you wroteand I think everyone who read it liked it too.
Thanks, brother.

 

[Astrid]

Very touching

 

[nema]

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I don't think it's something stupid. I really like what you wroteand I think everyone who read it liked it too.
Thanks, brother.

It's nothing. It's just words

 

[Tethys333]

It's nothing. It's just words

Words from yourself, i like It.
You've expressed yourself and that's beautiful

 

[Ayleth [TG]]

This is thoughtful @nema
Do not ever degrade your work in this manner. You express yourself while thinking of our Goddess, how can it be stupid or 'just words'? They carry devotion. They carry you.

The voice we have when speaking of what is sacred must deserve respect.

 

[nema]

Words from yourself, i like It.
You've expressed yourself and that's beautiful

Thank you.. i just REALLY don't like it i felt like i had though.. because i'm doing basically nothing for the ToZ.

 

[Tethys333]

Thank you.. i just REALLY don't like it i felt like i had though.. because i'm doing basically nothing for the ToZ.

Things can always be fixed.
It's never too late to take action and help ToZ.
The fact that you've contributed to this forum means a lot though.

 

[Wotanwarrior]

Your poem dedicated to Queen Astarte seems beautiful to me; it has a deep feeling.

 

[Nixxiena.Draven10]

I love it!!

 

[Chrysallida]

Very nice poem! Keep doing more when you're inspired!
I love Mother Astarte too!

While I wasn't active here, I used to copy to a notebook all the poems from my brothers and sisters from the Temple.
I also love saving the artworks, they all remind me the love and devotion shown from the members to the Gods.
The more we do, the more the Temple becomes a beautiful place (It already is! I mean MORE and MORE beautiful! ).
Let's continue to help each other out! There is a lot to grow in these Art and Music Threads.