AntiGoatFucker
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In addition...you can see that I am one terrible writer after all for formulating a Sad ending. Sometimes, I get bombarded and cringe about them "forgiving" since it was the past. FUCK NO, TAHT IS EVEN WORSE THAN THAT SAD ENDING. Or something like, taht they'll half hate that character for causing the mass deaths of their children in the past.
I'm laughing my ass off right now because of my stupidity, or do I lack some confidence.
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2017 11:39 AM, AntiGoatFucker <avivom666@... wrote:
*S[/IMG]THIS IS ANOTHER OF MY BIGGEST BULL-*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*[/B]
/////////////////////////Stay tuned,Wildfire ismentallytorturinghimself forthis
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This is, I believe, an impolite way to settle things with writer problems.
As a wr[/IMG]please keep th[/IMG] but give me replies and delete this after I have responded[/B] because this is irrelevant and spies can use this to fuck everything up. But remember one time I told you if I can add the Gods in some series that's getting a huge VN? Yep, at least I'm working on something that promotes Satanic agenda and doctrines safely as possible. Criticism is welcome so in the end, I don't get sentenced to the firing squad for this.
Anyways, my story ends kind of like this: the (Yhvh?) thing being constantly destroyed by the main character who has gone to a frozen but dangerous state. (Told you there's a sad ending). He represents the centipede though so that makes him an anti hero if he's helping what resembles the serpent kill (Leviathan) and free the world, but it is not entirely free because they just killed an important (Rabbi like reptilian which was the prominent main antagonist who kept popping up with 4th wall breaks until shit got serious with him)
Yep, the anti hero finds out he's just another alien, nor enemy or ally but was an adopted fellow in the past.
Here it comes...
I know the Gods would be shocked with what the anti hero did to earth in the process of containing earth.(He has viral powers referenced to controlling and mutating some swarm that represents the destructive force of nature or black magick) I mean, he is "incapacitating" the enemy "rabbi" and "crushing" it like a snake. Plus the damage already done to earth by the enemy in the comic means it has become inhabitable for standard oxygen based life.
+++++Before finalization:I planned that the Gods exile the anti hero for good since he was one trouble maker in the past who can't be forgiven.And for the humans, they were taken to Orion while the anti hero...he's left with the mess he made. The main char. that is an outright anti hero is now a hero but is exiled to be eternally lonely for his crimes. His own prison is his infested kingdom.+++++
This is what I need help with here, take it or leave it, criticism is welcome so I can improve the ending of the script. I am just saying in short, what outweighs which deed in the moral scale to the Gods? Causing a nuclear war that gave the world eternal winter or Saving the world and galaxy from enemy alien control? This is really difficult.
I gave you a disclaimer at the beginning anyways.
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I got voices that told that they will of course leave the anti-hero since it's no human and did hideous crimes in the past but thank it for contributing to their side and proving himself that he did the right thing. But his mental illnesses reside in him.
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Could I be insane? I just want to confirm if this is from our Gods or some random bullshit in my head that has to be destroyed like driving the "bullshit" train off a cliff with me in it forever. Oh shit, maybe I grew a bit negative after months of bullshit with Xtians in senior high's animation&programming that keep babbling kike shit while I block them off with the fire element or the sun. If it wasn't from the gods or anyone of Satan suggesting this, I'll just think for my fucking self instead of looking like some misanthropic Hollywood Jew who needs people to think for him.
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I'm laughing my ass off right now because of my stupidity, or do I lack some confidence.
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2017 11:39 AM, AntiGoatFucker <avivom666@... wrote:
*S[/IMG]THIS IS ANOTHER OF MY BIGGEST BULL-*BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP*[/B]
/////////////////////////Stay tuned,Wildfire ismentallytorturinghimself forthis
/////////////////////////This is, I believe, an impolite way to settle things with writer problems.
As a wr[/IMG]please keep th[/IMG] but give me replies and delete this after I have responded[/B] because this is irrelevant and spies can use this to fuck everything up. But remember one time I told you if I can add the Gods in some series that's getting a huge VN? Yep, at least I'm working on something that promotes Satanic agenda and doctrines safely as possible. Criticism is welcome so in the end, I don't get sentenced to the firing squad for this.
Anyways, my story ends kind of like this: the (Yhvh?) thing being constantly destroyed by the main character who has gone to a frozen but dangerous state. (Told you there's a sad ending). He represents the centipede though so that makes him an anti hero if he's helping what resembles the serpent kill (Leviathan) and free the world, but it is not entirely free because they just killed an important (Rabbi like reptilian which was the prominent main antagonist who kept popping up with 4th wall breaks until shit got serious with him)
Yep, the anti hero finds out he's just another alien, nor enemy or ally but was an adopted fellow in the past.
Here it comes...
I know the Gods would be shocked with what the anti hero did to earth in the process of containing earth.(He has viral powers referenced to controlling and mutating some swarm that represents the destructive force of nature or black magick) I mean, he is "incapacitating" the enemy "rabbi" and "crushing" it like a snake. Plus the damage already done to earth by the enemy in the comic means it has become inhabitable for standard oxygen based life.
+++++Before finalization:I planned that the Gods exile the anti hero for good since he was one trouble maker in the past who can't be forgiven.And for the humans, they were taken to Orion while the anti hero...he's left with the mess he made. The main char. that is an outright anti hero is now a hero but is exiled to be eternally lonely for his crimes. His own prison is his infested kingdom.+++++
This is what I need help with here, take it or leave it, criticism is welcome so I can improve the ending of the script. I am just saying in short, what outweighs which deed in the moral scale to the Gods? Causing a nuclear war that gave the world eternal winter or Saving the world and galaxy from enemy alien control? This is really difficult.
I gave you a disclaimer at the beginning anyways.
=========Easter egg========
I got voices that told that they will of course leave the anti-hero since it's no human and did hideous crimes in the past but thank it for contributing to their side and proving himself that he did the right thing. But his mental illnesses reside in him.
======
Could I be insane? I just want to confirm if this is from our Gods or some random bullshit in my head that has to be destroyed like driving the "bullshit" train off a cliff with me in it forever. Oh shit, maybe I grew a bit negative after months of bullshit with Xtians in senior high's animation&programming that keep babbling kike shit while I block them off with the fire element or the sun. If it wasn't from the gods or anyone of Satan suggesting this, I'll just think for my fucking self instead of looking like some misanthropic Hollywood Jew who needs people to think for him.
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