A poem I wrote today about Father

[Riri]

Hello brothers and sisters! People have told me often that I write good poetry, so I thought I would share my latest work with you. I hope it brings you some joy and inspiration. Any comments or constructive criticism is much appreciated.

The stars were twinkling, gleaming,
Glowing ever bright
Tiny pinprick rays of hope
Upon the gloomy night

She gazed so woefully upward
To the vast expanse of sky.
A single question forming,
"Father, who am I?"

And her father answered,
"Daughter, you are mine.
In time I'll come to show you
The power which is thine.

"It's burning deep within you,
A serpent waiting to rise.
For, you see, you are truly
A goddess in disguise."

And on that note, he left her.
Though he is never far.
For when you ask for guidance
He'll show you what you are.

HAIL SATAN!

 

[Allison P]

Awww. I love it! Thanks so much for sharing. Please, don't hesitate to
post any more if you write it. Hail Father Satan forever!

On 12/13/11, Riri <amygoldentopaz@... wrote:
Hello brothers and sisters! People have told me often that I write good
poetry, so I thought I would share my latest work with you. I hope it brings
you some joy and inspiration. Any comments or constructive criticism is much
appreciated.

The stars were twinkling, gleaming,
Glowing ever bright
Tiny pinprick rays of hope
Upon the gloomy night

She gazed so woefully upward
To the vast expanse of sky.
A single question forming,
"Father, who am I?"

And her father answered,
"Daughter, you are mine.
In time I'll come to show you
The power which is thine.

"It's burning deep within you,
A serpent waiting to rise.
For, you see, you are truly
A goddess in disguise."

And on that note, he left her.
Though he is never far.
For when you ask for guidance
He'll show you what you are.

HAIL SATAN!

 

[anaxium]

Fantastic poem! I loved it! You have talent, friend.

Hail Father Enki!!
Hail Andras!

--- In [url=mailto:[email protected]][email protected][/url], "Riri" <amygoldentopaz@... wrote:

Hello brothers and sisters! People have told me often that I write good poetry, so I thought I would share my latest work with you. I hope it brings you some joy and inspiration. Any comments or constructive criticism is much appreciated.

The stars were twinkling, gleaming,
Glowing ever bright
Tiny pinprick rays of hope
Upon the gloomy night

She gazed so woefully upward
To the vast expanse of sky.
A single question forming,
"Father, who am I?"

And her father answered,
"Daughter, you are mine.
In time I'll come to show you
The power which is thine.

"It's burning deep within you,
A serpent waiting to rise.
For, you see, you are truly
A goddess in disguise."

And on that note, he left her.
Though he is never far.
For when you ask for guidance
He'll show you what you are.

HAIL SATAN!