Temple of Zeus β€” The Assembly of the Gods

To Astarte

nema

#1

Just something stupid i wrote for Our Beautiful Mother and Queen that never left me.

No Matter how far,
No Matter how dark
The Throne that was burnt
My Will that was done

The eye that was closed
And my Kingdom of foes
My fiery Red soul
But my love never rose

Drowing in waters
Or choking in hell
In this beautiful Nightmare
I tell you, my friend

I would never make It
If She wasn't there..

Discussion

Tethys333Active Translator
#2

I don't think it's something stupid. I really like what you wroteand I think everyone who read it liked it too.
Thanks, brother.

#4

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Tethys333 wrote:View source

I don't think it's something stupid. I really like what you wroteand I think everyone who read it liked it too.
Thanks, brother.

It's nothing. It's just words

Tethys333Active Translator
#5
nema wrote:View source

It's nothing. It's just words

Words from yourself, i like It.
You've expressed yourself and that's beautiful

#6

This is thoughtful @nema 🌻
Do not ever degrade your work in this manner. You express yourself while thinking of our Goddess, how can it be stupid or 'just words'? They carry devotion. They carry you.

The voice we have when speaking of what is sacred must deserve respect.

#7
Tethys333 wrote:View source

Words from yourself, i like It.
You've expressed yourself and that's beautiful

Thank you.. i just REALLY don't like it πŸ˜‚ i felt like i had though.. because i'm doing basically nothing for the ToZ.

Tethys333Active Translator
#8
nema wrote:View source

Thank you.. i just REALLY don't like it πŸ˜‚ i felt like i had though.. because i'm doing basically nothing for the ToZ.

Things can always be fixed.
It's never too late to take action and help ToZ.
The fact that you've contributed to this forum means a lot though.

WotanwarriorActive Translator
#9

Your poem dedicated to Queen Astarte seems beautiful to me; it has a deep feeling.

ChrysallidaActive Translator
#11

Very nice poem! Keep doing more when you're inspired! :love:🌟
I love Mother Astarte too! 😊πŸ₯°

While I wasn't active here, I used to copy to a notebook all the poems from my brothers and sisters from the Temple.
I also love saving the artworks, they all remind me the love and devotion shown from the members to the Gods.
The more we do, the more the Temple becomes a beautiful place (It already is! I mean MORE and MORE beautiful! β˜€οΈπŸŒ·πŸŒΌπŸŒΉπŸŒ»πŸŒˆ).
Let's continue to help each other out! There is a lot to grow in these Art and Music Threads.