Runic Curse

[saeljasmua]

I've put together a runic curse that seems right to me.

Hagl Ehwaz Gebo Isa Fehu Kenaz Tiwaz Thurisaz Tiwaz Nauthiz Jera ___ Kenaz Fehu Isa Gebo Ehwaz Hagl

(I've put the rune names rather than the runes themselves)

These would be carved onto a stick and left near the victim, hopefully with something to do with the vicim wrapped around it. Negative energies are then channelled into it. The victim's name is written in the space, spelled out in runes (no repeating letters or silent letters).

What is your opinion and how could this be improved?

 

[Sael Jasmua]

So more like this?

Hagl Thurisaz Gebo ___ Nauthiz Gebo Thurisaz Hagl

(Vibrate runes over stick)

Ritual affirmation:
"The negative properties of these runes are prevalent. They are causing harm to the receiver."