JoS Websites Editorial Check Thread

[Serbon]

Bombing of Dresden: An Act of Genocide
https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Bombing_of_Dresden.html

No apostrophe at the end of the citation

There shouldn't be apostrophes at the beginning and at the end of this sentence, since the whole parapgraph is one citation.

"Sicherheits- und Hilfsdienst" insted of "Sicherheitsund Hilfsdienst"

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

Hey guys i was wondering if this is correct?

"The entire focus here is one should be (sing)one’s own energies as soon as one is able to."
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Advanced_Satanic_Ritual.html

The word in brackets?

 

[Henu the Great]

Hey guys i was wondering if this is correct?

"The entire focus here is one should be (sing)one’s own energies as soon as one is able to."
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Advanced_Satanic_Ritual.html

The word in brackets?

It should be 'using'.

 

[Serbon]

Real Death Camps
https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Real_Death_Camps.html

There is no second bracket

This quotation mark should be deleted

Quotation marks only at the beginning, not at the end

Quotation marks only at the end, not at the beginning

It should be "reward" instead of "reword"

This quotation mark should be deleted

Quotation marks missing

Quotation marks only at the beginning, not at the end

Quotation marks and ":" missing

There should be quotation marks instead of the barcket

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

Hello sorry i need to know what are those symbols for right at the bottom before and after the word witchcraft?

And also their needs to be a( .) where i added the brackets below. Its the second paragraph

https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Kids.html

"Satan never murdered anyone Satan never lied to anyone Satan accepts you as you are, and does not hate human nature Satan rules over what is called 'the occult' which is completely spiritual() Satan gives us knowledge and does not fear human spiritual advancement Satan does not fear humanity Christianity is not a religion; it is a program to stop people from knowing about and using the powers of their minds and souls known as �witchcraft.� ."

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

Hello sorry i need to know what are those symbols for right at the bottom before and after the word witchcraft?

And also their needs to be a( .) where i added the brackets below. Its the second paragraph

https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Kids.html

"Satan never murdered anyone Satan never lied to anyone Satan accepts you as you are, and does not hate human nature Satan rules over what is called 'the occult' which is completely spiritual() Satan gives us knowledge and does not fear human spiritual advancement Satan does not fear humanity Christianity is not a religion; it is a program to stop people from knowing about and using the powers of their minds and souls known as �witchcraft.� ."

there i mean sorry

 

[Soaring Eagle 666]

Hello sorry i need to know what are those symbols for right at the bottom before and after the word witchcraft?

And also their needs to be a( .) where i added the brackets below. Its the second paragraph

https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Kids.html

"Satan never murdered anyone Satan never lied to anyone Satan accepts you as you are, and does not hate human nature Satan rules over what is called 'the occult' which is completely spiritual() Satan gives us knowledge and does not fear human spiritual advancement Satan does not fear humanity Christianity is not a religion; it is a program to stop people from knowing about and using the powers of their minds and souls known as �witchcraft.� ."

there i mean sorry

Those symbols are quotes. It should be like this:

...using the powers of their minds and souls known as "witchcraft."

They were mangled by HTTrack when the websites were saved from angelfire before the shutdown in 2016.

In general, those symbols are one of the following:
"
'
©
An accented letter.

 

[Henu the Great]

Did I miss something? The reference number seven is not in the text on this page: https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/BeelzebulHC.html

 

[Henu the Great]

The homepage doesn't work on any website for me but specific pages work such as the meditation section, specific pages inside the meditation section, same with the witchcraft page and specific pages linked inside it. It seems only the homepage is down.

I love the new look of the runes page. However, there is an error under the Uruz rune: there are two sentences that need to be cut and pasted under Fehu.

Notice, and the above post also.

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

Right at the bottom of the page it should direct people to the forums not to the e-groups
https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Spiritual_Warfare_Training.html

 

[Serbon]

https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/BeelzebulHC.html

It is "Vajra" and not "Varja"

 

[Serbon]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/BlackSunMain.html

Quotation marks at the end are missing.
----
What could be added to Black Sun 666 page (from Exposing Xianity):
https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/The_Truth_About_Jesus_Christ.html
https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/Messiah.html

What could be added to Exposing Xianity (from Black Sun 666):
https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/Jewish_Nazarene.html
https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Temple_of_Solomon.html

 

[Serbon]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Temple_of_Solomon.html
There's a letter "F" in the top left corner of the page

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Evil_Jehova.html
The color of the page is different

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Identity.html
The color of the page is different

https://satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/Xianity_and_Communism.html
There's a random "!" after the title, on the left

 

[Voimir]

Psalm of Astarte link not working.

https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PsalmAstarteHC.html

 

[Serbon]

Overspend instead of "over spend"

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

"Nearly()invention in the material world is preceeded by an idea."

I think after the word nearly there should be a (all)

Its the paragraph right after
" Days 22, 23 and 24
Repeat the above with Image 5"
https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/First_Month.html

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

"When you are finished with the (neditation)"

Days 1-4 opening the thrird eye

https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Second_Month.html

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

About Ectoplasm:
(Ectoplams) has many different astral uses.

https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Third_Month.html

Should it be Ectoplasms?

There is no such word as Ectoplams on the internet that i can find.

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

Day 23:

1. Sit quietly and relax.

2. Visualize yourself walking barefoot on the earth. This is best if you can (visulize)yourself walking on soil in a farm field as this is very close to the element of earth.

The word should be visualize i think.

https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/Third_Month.html

 

[Soaring Eagle 666]

"Nearly()invention in the material world is preceeded by an idea."

I think after the word nearly there should be a (all)

Its the paragraph right after
" Days 22, 23 and 24
Repeat the above with Image 5"
https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/First_Month.html

Yes:

all
meditations
Ectoplasms
visualize

You were correct for all of them. Everything will be fixed eventually. It may be taking a while to get around to it, but everything in this thread will be fixed eventually. Thank you.

 

[One Wire Phenomenon]

" post_id=341708 time=1649127186 user_id=346]

"Nearly()invention in the material world is preceeded by an idea."

I think after the word nearly there should be a (all)

Its the paragraph right after
" Days 22, 23 and 24
Repeat the above with Image 5"
https://www.satanisgod.org/hailtosatansvictory666.angelfire.com/First_Month.html

Yes:

all
meditations
Ectoplasms
visualize

You were correct for all of them. Everything will be fixed eventually. It may be taking a while to get around to it, but everything in this thread will be fixed eventually. Thank you.

Ok

Do you maybe know why i can't download this link ?
https://anonymousfiles.io/f/Joy_of_Satan_Astrology_xspmc0L.pdf

Its on satan's library

 

[Soaring Eagle 666]

" post_id=341708 time=1649127186 user_id=346]

Do you maybe know why i can't download this link ?
https://anonymousfiles.io/f/Joy_of_Satan_Astrology_xspmc0L.pdf

Its on satan's library

It doesn't work for me either. The file appears to be broken or deleted.

But I think that same file is already on the JoS server here:
https://joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Joy_of_Satan_Astrology.pdf

 

[Henu the Great]

https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Kumbhaka_Lunar_Breath.html

First Set:
1. Inhale through both nostrils for a count of 2
2. Hold four a count of 4
3. Exhale for a count of 6
4. Hold for a count of 4

 

[Serbon]

It should be "some" instead of "same"

 

[Serbon]

https://www.satanslibrary.org/Rtrs/Reverse195Ritual.html

• The blood and lives of both human beings and animals has become toxic to enemy alien agenda and the Jews.
-
It should be "have" instead of "has"

 

[Henu the Great]

Error @ Sacral Chakra Necronomicon meditation

1. Focus on your sacral chakra. Breathe energy into this chakra and on the exhale, drop your head so you can feel the vibration in your solar chakra and vibrate "NERGAL." N-N-N-AY-AY-R-R-R-G-G-G-AY-AY-L-L-L Be sure to roll your R's

https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Necronomicon_Meditations.html

 

[The Alchemist7 [JG]]

I think there is a mistake in this article:
EZ Chakra Spin
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/EZ_Chakra_Spin.html

It says:
`When you spin the 6th chakra, focus *behind* your 3rd eye, in the middle of your head.`

Behind the third eye is not in the middle of the head, but is right below the Crown chakra, that would be the correct location of the 6th chakra since the third eye is an extension of it. Is not in the middle of the head if right behind the third eye.

 

[Henu the Great]

I think there is a mistake in this article:
EZ Chakra Spin
https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/EZ_Chakra_Spin.html

It says:
`When you spin the 6th chakra, focus *behind* your 3rd eye, in the middle of your head.`

Behind the third eye is not in the middle of the head, but is right below the Crown chakra, that would be the correct location of the 6th chakra since the third eye is an extension of it. Is not in the middle of the head if right behind the third eye.

I think it is clear: trajectory right behind of the 3rd eye, middle of the head = top of 6th chakra

 

[FancyMancy]

On

https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AstarteHC.html

1)
there are some extraneous text bits for bullet points, i.e. to create bullet list here, we type

[list]
[*]item 1
[*]item 2
[*]item 3
[/list]

which shows as

• item 1
• item 2
• item 3

but on the page, there are a small number like this -

[list]
[*][*]item 1
[*][*]item 2
[*][*]item 3
[/list]

which shows as this

• {*}item 1
• {*}item 2
• {*}item 3

(but with the open and close square brackets; it won't work on here)

2)
Also on the same page, the link "Honorary/Invocatory Psalm Astarte" (https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/PsalmAstarteHC.html) goes to nowhere but the eternal void of nothingness (it doesn't work!).

3)
In the paragraph beginning,
She is labeled the “lady of heaven” in several second-millennium B.C.E. Egyptian texts,
there is a link for one of the biblical references, but not the rest.

4)
Further down, there appears to be a mistake in the paragraph,
Her Sigil represents a case where spiritual alchemical notions inside a sigil are overabundant. It would not be an understatement to say that most if not all the mysteries of the human soul are explained in her very sigil.
I think that should be "It would not be an overstatement...", meaning to say such a thing would not be an exaggeration.

 

[Serbon]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Satanic_Symbols.html
Lucifer, Lucifer, stretch your tail, and lead me away full speed through the strait passage, of the valley of death, to the shining light, the palace of of the Gods -Isanatha Muni

 

[ogami]

On https://satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/DEMONSI.html/index.html
In the section about Mammon the "click here for more" button does not work

 

[Henu the Great]

Invoking the Elements - https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Invoking_Elements.html

The following paragraph ends abruptly.

To properly invoke, direct, and control the elements, you must be balanced in all of the elements. Most of us have imbalances. These can usually be seen in our astrology charts. Those of us who progress and continue on will be working

 

[Egon]

To note, this is not to fix things that need updating, but solely editorial. Grammar mistakes, syntax mistakes, the list goes.

In the Moon page, Moon/Pluto aspect:
https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/MOON.html
"The mother's influence I the person's life is very strong for better or for worse."

 

[Serbon]

https://satanslibrary.org/666BlackSun/Satanic_Symbols.html

"The Black Sun, the Raven, the Crow, and the color black also syin regards to the star in reverse: mbolize the Nigredo [transformation] stage. The Black Sun is the astral Sun."

 

[Egon]

https://www.ancient-forums.com/viewtopic.php?p=375055#p375055


Just send your suggestions to the editorial check thread. There's not really a reason to be this upset (I'm condescending here), I get what you're saying but if the problem is one dialect really has a "lower vibration" than the other then we should all go back Shakespearean English or something, all Southern Europeans back to Latin, and all Greeks back to either Classical or Koine (Alexandrian) Greek - that sounds awesome and you have my vote but right now it's not appliable, and we need more eloquence than which of your dialectism is more "advanced".

I've never had this level of complaint in the pt forum/emails, and the differences between Brazilian and European Portuguese are much more screaming, lets say compare this Irish guy with a Texan and you will know what I'm talking about:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=luojLwpXL6k

My only criticism to the "style" of HP Hooded is in the repetition of certain words. For one the sermon about masculinity used "literally" about 20 times, while that is not "incorrect", and used a few times works for the intended effect of sarcasm, using some words too much does give a sense of cacophony and limitation of vocabulary. I had a hard time translating that sermon (though that was because there was a lot of memes that are hard to adapt and not necessarily the writting quality or this). I didn't feel though as it was worthy addressing and it could be just on me. Another one is repeating the same word after a break, for instance some breaks come like this:

"... that existed in the Temple of Inanna. Inanna's Temple was..."


One in the Ritual for Baalzebul, which I'm not sure if this was really intendend:

"In Egypt, you were known to Egypt as the Ruling Power"

I supposed he reutilized the model from Astarte's ritual and just forgot to adapt it, but I'm ignorant if that was intentional, if there's an occult meaning etc. or he was just ok as it was:
You were known to Egypt as Isis,

Either way, why do you think people (apparently) read your posts much less than HP HC who arguably writes more extensive texts? Because the texts of the HPs most of the time give the information they want to communicate, while you go on with 20 lines of roundabout building up for the 2 lines of the actual punchline somewhere. You play too much on the style of the language rather than communicating. If HP HC became more succinct in his writing, you can do that too.

"True eloquence consists in saying all that should be said, and only what should be said."
-François de la Rochefoucauld

 

[MercuryWisdom]

"These religions use fear is used as a tool."
Grammatical error found here: https://www.satanisgod.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Kundalini.html

 

[Egon]

On the general Demons page:
https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/AllDemons.html

"Demonology Section: How To Summon Demongs / Gods Of Hell"

On Baal-Berith's page:
https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Baal-Berith.html

The paragraph below the coin picture:
"He was the protector of the covenant between between Shechem"

 

[Veritá_666]

https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/TenthKey.html

I don't know if it's done on purpose, but the tenth enochian key is missing the copyright markings. I point this out because it is apparently the only key that does not have the copyright markings.

 

[Korpi]

https://www.joyofsatan.org/www.angelfire.com/empire/serpentis666/Azazel.html

"In Ancient Greece, his place of worship was in the Delphi, the infamous "Dephic Oracle", which was the global center of spiritual consultation and prophecy for many centuries."

 

[Egon]

https://www.satanslibrary.org/ExposingChristianity/Tetragrammaton.html
"Getting back to the four quarters of the soul, following the RAUM meditation, RAUM MeditationOne should..."

Images on this page are broken:
https://www.kabbalahexposed.com/GreekKabbalah.htm

From wayback machine they're respectively:
https://web.archive.org/web/1id_/https://s16-us2.startpage.com/cgi-bin/serveimage?url=http%3A%2F%2Fsnagfilms-a.akamaihd.net%2F83%2F7f%2F56c520274b47ab64962e2e9156eb%2F337-lec22-1536x865.jpg&sp=bf9f71efdc61922314def94a816963ea

https://web.archive.org/web/1id_/https://s16-us2.startpage.com/cgi-bin/serveimage?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.historyofmacedonia.org%2FAncientMacedonia%2Fimages%2Fmacedonianempirelarge.jpg&sp=017d629bc072bd345853a56b37126fd8

In the menu of kabbalahexposed.com - the link to "Rabbis Admit: Satan is Shiva" redirects to the home page itself.

These pages:
https://kabbalahexposed.com/Hannukah.html
https://kabbalahexposed.com/Purim.html
https://kabbalahexposed.com/God_Control.html
https://kabbalahexposed.com/Jesus_Kabbalah.html
- the titles are duplicated in the following line.

There's a problem below the title here too:
https://kabbalahexposed.com/SatanVictorious.html