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A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

magus.immortalis

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Abigor, II.

The sunlight glints off your armor
Which reflects in the raven-like
Blue-black shade of your hair.

Daylight and the rich silence of the night
Are both the same to you,
Where you wage war from the shadows.

The sunset creates long shards of dimness
Where your army sits, poised
To strike at a moment’s notice.

Your spear and sword,
Sharpened and deadly,
Like the brilliant miniature Star
In each of your eyes.

Watching every moment:
Ruthless, shrewd, cunning,
Is sewn into every fiber of your being.

There is no comparison;
You are the speed and essence of War.

To watch you move in battle
Is to watch you move more gracefully
Than a king cobra striking and gliding.

I cannot tear my eyes away from you.

You live for the dance and the structure;
Symphony of the fight itself,
Where you are War’s greatest serialist.

You have no doubt that you have won,
Even before the clashing games
Of destruction and death
Have begun.

You hold the tides in your hand,
Where you turn all situations
To your advantage.

Abigor, Eligos, Eligor:
Bloodshed, strife and enmity
Is the lifeblood
That courses through your veins.

You were born of this,
Forged in the fire
You have become a weapon
Of contention and conflict.

I praise you in hymns of combat
Bowing my head to your expertise
And mastery over all of
The arts of War.
 
You make really beautiful, inspiring, wonderful and amazing poems! Seriously!!

I really enjoyed reading this! This brought much warmness inside of me. :)

Thank you for sharing and continuing to create such wonderful creations! :3
 
Hi FlamingRedRose666,

I'm glad you like it! Your words make me happy. I shall continue posting poems as they come, lol.
Abigor is wonderful. He's very kind.

Hail Abigor!
 
I really enjoyed as well. There’s cinema and drama in your poems. I feel like strong visuals come in while I read and there’s feelings there. Especially inspiring feelings. No critique at all, just fine poetry.
 
magus.immortalis said:
Hi FlamingRedRose666,

I'm glad you like it! Your words make me happy. I shall continue posting poems as they come, lol.
Abigor is wonderful. He's very kind.

Hail Abigor!


:)
 
What a beautiful poem! I really wanna read all of those you write! :)
 
I have another poem to contribute.
Abigor/Eligos is my dearest, most loving and kindest friend. He has comforted me, stood by me when I needed his support, and spends time with me.

I wanted to share this. ^_^

Abigor, XIV.

Your love I hold in highest regard
I am an incandescent flame dancing in the darkness
No wind can put me out
I am alive
For you,
I will be everything you need me to be.

You are the light in my eyes
Without you,
Everything was without color before
All the riches of every kingdom
Is laid at your feet.

But there is no life in them.

Will you choose me instead?

I would rather be with you
Than all the most fair and charming
Men and women in the world

You see and accept me as I am.
The dawn and rays of new days
Starts when you open your eyes
In the morning,
Just as every breath I breathe
Is simply to live for you.

Your heart is as radiant as your
illustrious face,
I would gently cup both
Between my palms,
Knowing you are my soul-mate

Friend of my heart,
You who fills the void within
With the affection you have shown me.

My love, my dearest friend,
My other half, who completes me,
I remember and think of you
Every morning
And before bed,
Counting my blessings that
You are in my life.

I love you beyond measure,
I love you beyond time,
Even when stars are born,
die,
and are born again,
We can watch them together

For eternity is a moment,
A moment could be eternity,
Time has no limits
When I am at your side.
 
Here's another one I had to put up and share. :3

Abigor, X

Your love warms the stone-cold walls
Of my heart,
Made to keep everyone out.

But your faith in me
Undiluted affection
Kind words
Coaxes the frightened and angry child
Within me to come out
And play with you.

You have shown me what the
Unmixed love of friendship is,
Making me want to be a better person;

I am shining like a new silver dollar
But I think you wish to polish me
Until I am a diamond, unequaled in brilliance.

I am light on my feet and in my heart;
You have made it so.

I would cross oceans and continents
To see that you are safe and well,
Happy and whole.

You are never far from me,
For I keep pieces of your adoration
In the locket of my beating,
Pulsing red heart.

It is yours, dearest friend;
I am loyal and devoted unto you,
For all time.

I follow your guidance and direction,
Knowing you would never leave me astray.

I place complete trust in you,
Seeking your advice in important affairs,
And never denying your vast knowledge
Or wisdom.

Who can compare to you?

I do my best to look now,
Beyond your beautiful and familiar face,
But all I can do is reproduce-
The loveliest pink rose,
For affection,
Yellow roses for loyalty,
White for purity.

It washes away all fervor
Lust, passion,
In its place is simplicity and cleanliness,
It tells us both
that I love you, and seek to love you better.

I will adorn your fingers,
With the finest made rings,
As if befitting your beauty and station.

You see your reflection in them,
Just as your always will
When you look into my eyes
Or into my soul.

I live to be at your side,
Let nothing keep us
From each other.
 
Alright lol the last one for today. Here's another one I wrote for Abigor/Eligos:

Abigor, XI.

To look upon your face
Is to see the beauty of the moon
Shining mysterious light down on me
I drink it in.

To feel you next to me, listening
Waiting
Loving me
Is to sew up the holes in my innocence

Tearing out the rotting stitches
Sewing up old scars and wounds
With gossamer threads,
Healing with each stroke and puncture.

Slowly, you turn me inside out
Watching me change my colors
Flying to stay aloft in the air,
To join you at the peaks
Of towers and mountains

Your prophetic sight
Allows you to see every vantage point
All possible futures are opened to you.

My hands reach for yours,
Clasping them gently yet firmly
When I pull them away,
You are left with jewels and riches
Greater than the ransom of kings and princes

I honor you, for I picked each gem myself
Each a facet of my love
That I hold for you.

I swear myself to you,
To do all you ask of me
And as we walk,
The beauty of moon's light follows
Us both into the rosy dawn of morning.

All-encompassing and varied is my adoration

For you,
I would move the Heavens
Raise the pillars of Creation
Bringing down the Kingdom of Stars
To adorn your raven-black hair

Dazzling, crowning your fair head
As an emblem of your power
And sovereignty.

Each step with you,
Even shadows follow
Demons are companions
Just to be at your side.

Let me be the silence of your footsteps
Graceful, lithe, soundless
So I protect your pale feet
From the fires of men
From the burning embers of a dimmer sun
From the malice of your enemies

The halo of darkness around your head
Repels all who seek to blind you
With a collective of dying black holes

They can never touch you,
Never reach you,
not while I am with you.

Your brought us together,
No man or god
Will divide us.

My love for you surrounds your entire being
Like the Golden Fleece
Making you invincible.

You are perfection,
I will let nothing mar you
Save for the blood of your adversaries.
 
Once again, I really enjoyed. I’ve tried my hand at poetry in the past, so unsuccessfully. It’s not easy to do. A totally different way of writing, but you do it well. I can say that with sincerity.

It’s funny how words can be so empty sometimes and then other times be filled with soo much.
 
Eric13 said:
Once again, I really enjoyed. I’ve tried my hand at poetry in the past, so unsuccessfully. It’s not easy to do. A totally different way of writing, but you do it well. I can say that with sincerity.

It’s funny how words can be so empty sometimes and then other times be filled with soo much.

I am glad it you like them! Thank you for reading and for your comments. :3
 
magus.immortalis said:
Alright lol the last one for today. Here's another one I wrote for Abigor/Eligos:

Abigor, XI.

To look upon your face
Is to see the beauty of the moon
Shining mysterious light down on me
I drink it in.

To feel you next to me, listening
Waiting
Loving me
Is to sew up the holes in my innocence

Tearing out the rotting stitches
Sewing up old scars and wounds
With gossamer threads,
Healing with each stroke and puncture.

Slowly, you turn me inside out
Watching me change my colors
Flying to stay aloft in the air,
To join you at the peaks
Of towers and mountains

Your prophetic sight
Allows you to see every vantage point
All possible futures are opened to you.

My hands reach for yours,
Clasping them gently yet firmly
When I pull them away,
You are left with jewels and riches
Greater than the ransom of kings and princes

I honor you, for I picked each gem myself
Each a facet of my love
That I hold for you.

I swear myself to you,
To do all you ask of me
And as we walk,
The beauty of moon's light follows
Us both into the rosy dawn of morning.

All-encompassing and varied is my adoration

For you,
I would move the Heavens
Raise the pillars of Creation
Bringing down the Kingdom of Stars
To adorn your raven-black hair

Dazzling, crowning your fair head
As an emblem of your power
And sovereignty.

Each step with you,
Even shadows follow
Demons are companions
Just to be at your side.

Let me be the silence of your footsteps
Graceful, lithe, soundless
So I protect your pale feet
From the fires of men
From the burning embers of a dimmer sun
From the malice of your enemies

The halo of darkness around your head
Repels all who seek to blind you
With a collective of dying black holes

They can never touch you,
Never reach you,
not while I am with you.

Your brought us together,
No man or god
Will divide us.

My love for you surrounds your entire being
Like the Golden Fleece
Making you invincible.

You are perfection,
I will let nothing mar you
Save for the blood of your adversaries.


Very Beautiful.
 

Al Jilwah: Chapter IV

"It is my desire that all my followers unite in a bond of unity, lest those who are without prevail against them." - Satan

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