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A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2019 2:14 am
by magus.immortalis
Abigor, II.

The sunlight glints off your armor
Which reflects in the raven-like
Blue-black shade of your hair.

Daylight and the rich silence of the night
Are both the same to you,
Where you wage war from the shadows.

The sunset creates long shards of dimness
Where your army sits, poised
To strike at a moment’s notice.

Your spear and sword,
Sharpened and deadly,
Like the brilliant miniature Star
In each of your eyes.

Watching every moment:
Ruthless, shrewd, cunning,
Is sewn into every fiber of your being.

There is no comparison;
You are the speed and essence of War.

To watch you move in battle
Is to watch you move more gracefully
Than a king cobra striking and gliding.

I cannot tear my eyes away from you.

You live for the dance and the structure;
Symphony of the fight itself,
Where you are War’s greatest serialist.

You have no doubt that you have won,
Even before the clashing games
Of destruction and death
Have begun.

You hold the tides in your hand,
Where you turn all situations
To your advantage.

Abigor, Eligos, Eligor:
Bloodshed, strife and enmity
Is the lifeblood
That courses through your veins.

You were born of this,
Forged in the fire
You have become a weapon
Of contention and conflict.

I praise you in hymns of combat
Bowing my head to your expertise
And mastery over all of
The arts of War.

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Fri Jan 11, 2019 10:27 pm
by FlamingRedRose666
You make really beautiful, inspiring, wonderful and amazing poems! Seriously!!

I really enjoyed reading this! This brought much warmness inside of me. :)

Thank you for sharing and continuing to create such wonderful creations! :3

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2019 4:13 pm
by magus.immortalis
Hi FlamingRedRose666,

I'm glad you like it! Your words make me happy. I shall continue posting poems as they come, lol.
Abigor is wonderful. He's very kind.

Hail Abigor!

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2019 5:17 pm
by Eric13
I really enjoyed as well. There’s cinema and drama in your poems. I feel like strong visuals come in while I read and there’s feelings there. Especially inspiring feelings. No critique at all, just fine poetry.

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2019 7:55 pm
by FlamingRedRose666
magus.immortalis wrote:Hi FlamingRedRose666,

I'm glad you like it! Your words make me happy. I shall continue posting poems as they come, lol.
Abigor is wonderful. He's very kind.

Hail Abigor!



:)

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2019 8:46 pm
by Aquarius
What a beautiful poem! I really wanna read all of those you write! :)

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2019 12:39 am
by zolaluckystar
Beautiful Magus. Thanks for sharing :)

Re: A Poem for Abigor/Eligos/Eligor.

Posted: Wed Jan 16, 2019 3:47 pm
by magus.immortalis
Eric13, Aquarius, Zolaluckystar, thanks for your comments, and for reading!

Hail Abigor!