Hymn for Anubis

[SaqqaraNox]

As the title suggests, this composition is for the great Anubis.

English is not my language, so if you should have any suggestions on the use of more appropriate terms or that render the meaning better in English, I welcome them


Black triumph
O King of the Underworld
Acclaimed by the Nile
Who to Thee intones his Hymn

Jackal of the Sands
Thou art guide and protector of Souls
Beyond the Red Sand Dunes
Through the Night

Twilight of Life
Over the Beyond Your Power extends
Where Your Faithful Souls
Are cradled in Thy Cloak of Shadow

Thy Proud Gaze
Shining with Power
Cuts through Eternal Night
To welcome the Immortal Dawn

Like the Pyramid Sempiternal,
Everlasting Sunset is Thy Name,
Anubis!

 

[Norse 88]

That's excellent. I liked it a lot. As an English speaker I wouldn't change the words. I found it all the more easier to read knowing you were not native in speaking English, and this was because I reflexively lowered my expectations on language use and instead focused on the feelings the words conveyed rather than the strict meaning an English speaker might use.

My favourite is the second last stanza. It just sounds strong when you read it - does that make sense?

This could easily become a song.

 

[MiniMe3388]

I like it

Hail Anubis!

 

[Karnonnos [JG]]

Excellent this would sound great as a song

 

[Lightning_Puma]

You're so talented!!

Please make more!!

 

[SaqqaraNox]

Thank you very much to everyone. Your words make me so happy.

I had not thought that it could become the lyrics of a song. It's a nice idea, I love music so much that I almost can't live without :lol: , only unfortunately I don't have the skills and expertise to completely create a song from zero.

In any case if one day someone wants to use this composition to put it into a song, they can

 

[SaqqaraNox]

You're so talented!!

Please make more!!

Yes, I will!

 

[fuoco blu 666]

I also put here the interpretation of the symbolism and the meaning of your Hymn to Anubis so that even the English-speaking members can have some ideas to better understand the keys to reading the spiritual allegories:

The black triumph stands for the glory of the exit from spiritual ignorance because black is the color that contains and absorbs light, the sound of the water of the Nile refers to the flow of life that takes over death, water is also knowledge and where there is life there is also water and intelligent life.
The sands of the desert represent the deep meditation from which the spiritual power given by self-mastery awakens, the red and black in this invocation for Anubis are the colors of spiritual alchemy and are the colors of the passage and transformation from nigredo (black) to rubedo (red), Egypt was known as black and red land precisely because it was the land of alchemy because most of the population possessed great spiritual knowledge.

The gaze of Anudis that shines in the night and then comes the immortal dawn is the divine power of spiritual knowledge that defeats death through the awakening of the energies of the kundalini serpent in order to have a faster advancement towards Divinity.

The pyramid is the balance between heaven and earth and the fully empowered soul, the pyramid is like an extremely large physical chakra, soul in a sunset of death and therefore the end of death thanks to the perfection of the soul (Sun 666) which gives physical and spiritual immortality.

You can fully perceive the desire for power and knowledge that you have and how this is transforming you alchemically for the better with your sensitivity to supernal things in the noblest spirituality and how this ties in for you to Anubis in particular as God close to you in your mind and in your soul which is very strongly attracted by the spiritual alchemical meaning that Anubis has for the completion of the Magnum Opus.